It seems like a smooth disturbance,
spreading far and wide
with culminating circles.
A pebble fallen into the water,
and gone creating a parametrized speech,
with a hundred ripples following
far and wide. .
A part of the lake is disturbed
with a sudden mighty throw,
and ripples reach the other end
for restlessness follows.
It seems like a smooth disturbance
spreading far and wide,
for one does not know
it's puissant tide.
Comments
Ankita B (author) on September 24, 2020:
Thank you Brenda for your encouraging words. I am so pleased to know that you enjoyed reading this poem.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on September 24, 2020:
Ankita,
You described this well.
I remember the ripples in the water.
Have a great day.
Ankita B (author) on August 02, 2018:
Thank you Kyokusiima
Kyokusiima Diana from Kampala-Uganda on August 02, 2018:
good and interesting
Ankita B (author) on August 01, 2018:
Thank you
Crezyl Joy Villa Sabrido from Kidapawan, Philippines on August 01, 2018:
I love it.
Mark Tulin from Palm Springs, California on August 01, 2018:
It is indeed powerful. I always like watching ripples and it’s spread. One of my favorite songs in fact is called Ripple by the Grateful Dead.
Ankita B (author) on August 01, 2018:
Thank you David. Glad you liked it.
David Irvine from Norwich UK on August 01, 2018:
An elegant moment of time. Thanks for sharing.
