Rhyme Sublime

Updated on January 29, 2018

A rhyme in time may so well sound sublime,

And is just what poetry should be all about.

The more mellow, of each gal and a fellow,

All without any bellow, or one single shout.


Words can be so fun, laughing at every one,

And when rhyming each, it does help a ton.

May elicit us to giggle, in our seats to wiggle,

And without us hearing that garish old pun.


Rhymes may attract, and in our being exact,

Each one may so choose in just what is read,

Can make us all happy, not in being so sappy,

Just before we all take a nap, hop in our bed.


When all seems so glum, forgetting how to hum,

The day may seem so dark or just so very grey,

That funny little rhyme, we thought of just in time,

Or a lyric we remembered, can well save our day.


Forgot to press our pants, we don't have to dance,

As we're shouting out bad cuss words all the while.

Just remember how limber we felt one December,

Dressing as Santa, a formal party, was not in style.


You ran out of gas, on a freeway, at last, want to cry,

Then you recalled the gas can hauled, a reason why.

Like an unhappy little pup, now just pick your chin up,

Better and happier days are coming soon, by and by,



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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Most delightful and love the photos of that frog.

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      Kari Poulsen 2 months ago from Ohio

      Words are fun, and rhymes more so. :)

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      Shyron E Shenko 2 months ago from Texas

      whonu, I would feel so sad and blue

      My true love is in so much pain

      no one knows what to do

      I feel so lost without my love

      But you poem is like a ray from above

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      *

      Blessings my friend

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 months ago from Central Florida

      I got it. :-)

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      Louise Powles 2 months ago from Norfolk, England

      I really enjoyed reading your poem. And I love the photo's of the frogs too.

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      whonunuwho 2 months ago from United States

      By the way, there's a big LOL with that comment!

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      whonunuwho 2 months ago from United States

      Remember a golden rule, always try to be cool,

      To heck with the English Dictionary, and school! whonu

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 months ago from Central Florida

      Without a daily dose of silliness

      We risk falling into a dark abyss

      What fun would life be

      If we couldn't bounce rhymes

      Off of you and me?

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      whonunuwho 2 months ago from United States

      Thank you, Michael my friend and many blessings to all. whonu

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      Michael-Milec 2 months ago

      sublime

      rhyme

      trivial

      &

      worthwhile

      practical

      life giving

      essential

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      whonunuwho 2 months ago from United States

      You are so welcome my friend. Many blessings Eric. whonu

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      Eric Dierker 2 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Thank you that was fun and settling.

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