Reflections: An Old Man Revisits His Life. A Poetic Odyssey
Introduction
The old man sits alone, lost in his own reflection of weakness, sealed by sorrow for the lost years he longs for. Has he lost the right to claim the moral high ground? In spite of misguided choices that still ravish his consciousness he still carries hope.
You and I can never go back. We can't correct or change the past - or can we? Can we alter our past? Einstein thought so. But, even so, what's important is how we grow and learn from the choices we make.
If the truth be known, each of us will identify with the old man in one way or the other. As you unravel each line of the old man's reflections, you may discover a bit of yourself hidden between the lines.
An Old Man Reflects on His Life
He walks alone his time is short
He basks in memories of the past
Innocence, naivety, choices, mistakes
Serve a fools fairy tale
Reflections of another time
Weave lost cobwebs in the mind
Have I served my purpose here
Doubting clouds run rampant
Seeds of greatness are within
All have entered without sin
Seeking virtue conducted by nature's voice
Mentoring mankind walking blind
Transparent life its ups and downs
Lay before me patterns bold
Have I passed the endless tests
Will my soul be laid to rest
Have I Served My Purpose Here?
Examine memories days are ending
Begging for another chance
Repentance struggling to forgive
Others and himself
Tears longing for his loved ones
Pierce his wrinkled, leathery cheeks
Friends and family went before him
Reflections of another time, lived long ago
Search for the young boy living deep within
Ignited memories pierce old eyes
Inviting youth to join once more
Relive, re-dream, a new King Arthur
Wrapping up mind's endless chatter
Evolves the capacity for understanding
Viewing the past through maturities lessons
Stepping stones to self-actualization and fulfillment
'Tis not the end but the beginning
Lifes scars turn into stars
Reflecting bonds with gratitude, all is well, all is well
The message is clear, love transcends all
I am ready.
Life's Message: To Love And Learn
How Often Do You Reflect On Your Life?
A Video Worth Viewing
One of my Favorite Quotes About Reflection
Life can only be understood backwards; but it must be lived forwards.
Søren Kierkegaard
Questions & Answers
© 2018 Audrey Hunt
Comments
AUTHORPamela,
Thank you for taking time to read my poem. I appreciate your kind support and comments. "So then the end can be the beginning." is such a powerful phrase. I'm glad you included this. Peace be with you, my friend.
Linda,
So nice to see you here. Thanks for your comments and the time you spent here. My best to you!
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Eric,
We think alike. I often ask myself where would I be today if not for the mistakes I've made in my life. And one reason I turn to your sermons often is that each one helps me to stay on track and inspires me to always try and make the right choices.
Thank you.
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Dianna
Bishop T.D.Jakes said something I'll never forget: "If you can't figure out your purpose, figure out your passion. For your passion will lead you right into your purpose."
Thank you, my friend.
You reminded me that we all have a purpose and to ponder upon it is worthwhile. Great writing!
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Nellianna,
You are an artist with words. I've enjoyed your writings and been amazed by each piece. Thank you for being here and sending hugs your way.
Chitrangada,
Thank you, dear one, for your kind words. I can relate to you being an over-thinker to avoid hurting anyone's feelings. It's a good and kind way to be. Blessings and love to you.
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Dora,
Your kind comments mean so much...thank you. I appreciate your support. Reflecting on life seems to be on my mind lately. I suppose it's natural when we approach a certain age. My best to you.
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mcbirdbks
Thank you, Mike, for sharing your thoughts. Reflecting on one's life appears to be a natural part of aging. It certainly is for me. :) Sending you hugs and wishes for good health.
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Rajan
Yes, I agree that reflection on the past comes more often as we age. I'm doing more than ever before. The quote pack a punch, doesn't it?
In the end, it's all about love. Thank you, my friend.
How true, Audrey! I think one tends to reflect more on the past as one gets older. The quote about reflection is so difficult to live by.
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loannis Arvanitis
Thank you, my friend, for writing such beautiful comments. I love your motto and try hard to live it. I believe that if anyone action could heal the world and bring peace it would be to love each other. Blessings to you, Sean.
Impressive lines inspiring even more reflection on the part of the reader. "Have I passed the endless tests?" Your final verse is encouraging.
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Rinita Sen
Thank you. So nice to see you here. Best wishes to you.
Frances,
Thanks for being here and for your comments. Take care.
Hello Audrey - This is a good piece of writing. The human condition strikes all of us. Some harder than others, as we all approach our lives with somewhat different standards. Many of us will have few regrets.
Sorry I am late.
This ending says it all:
" 'Tis not the end but the beginning
Lifes scars turn into stars
Reflecting bonds with gratitude, all is well, all is well
The message is clear, love transcends all
I am ready."
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Bill Holland
I believe reflecting is a good thing to do. I suppose as we age, we reflect more often. How beautiful that you love your life! You reflect gratitude...speaking of which, we are all so grateful for you.
Thank you, dear friend.
Love
Audrey
An Amazing poem and a life lesson for all ages! Yes, my dear Audrey, I believe that Love can put everything in place, past, present and future. My motto is:
"Do the best you can with Love in your Heart, and that's always enough."
Thank you for the blessing of this piece of your kind Heart!
Admiration and Gratitude!
Sean
Beautiful and thought provoking poem, so nicely expressed!
I do reflect upon my life, my words, my actions quite often. May be an over thinker, because I don’t want to hurt anyone by my words or actions, and try my best to avoid mistakes.
Your poem is beautiful, your sketch excellent. An artist at heart with a loving soul. God Bless You Audrey. Thanks for sharing this.
Awww.....thanks for remembering my hubbie award! Yes, my Hubbie was for Best Commenter. I was so proud! LOL.......It's sad we don't do the awards anymore.....but "Oh well." Have a great week-end Audrey!
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Paula
I remember when hub pages were giving out the rewards for "Best this and best that" and included in the categories was "Who is the best for leaving comments" (or something close to this.) You were voted the best on hub pages. You still wear this honor well!
My eyes filled with tears as I buried myself in your words. Your comments are poetry in itself, sweet Paula. I am truly touched and humbled.
I can tell that you relate to my poem and this makes me so happy. As you may have guessed, this was written from my heart and about my struggles in life. I've been doing a considerable amount of reflecting these days.
Thank you, my friend.
Love and hugs.
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Mary
Love is what makes us human, it makes life worth living. Thank you for your valuable comment.
I love that quote, too. And as we move forward, love is all that matters. Thank you for this inspiring message.
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Divine
So nice to see you here. Enjoy your day and the first feel of Fall.
Thank you for sharing your poems.
Audrey, my beautiful, smiling lady friend...is there no end to your massive talents? You are a bouquet of so many lovely flowers, tied with silk and decorated with pure gold. You share your voice in music, your artistic skills in sketches and you touch our hearts with your moving Poetry.
The finishing touch to all of this, comes through in your loving nature.
This poem moved me to tears as I read and related. Hugs, Paula
Allow me to state the obvious: this is simply beautiful. One of your best pieces of writing in all the time I've known you.
Does it speak to me? My goodness, I spend a lot of time reflecting these days. I suppose it is only natural to do so, and I find it very comforting. I absolutely love my life, I love my friends, and I definitely love this poetic gift you have given us all.
love
bill
A well done piece indeed. I love my life. So when I reflect i see those mistakes I have made and thank God I did, otherwise where would I be.
Audry, This is a lovely, thought provoking poem. It covers the doubts we may have over past choices, the forgiveness we need to live our older years with peace. Reaching self-actualization, so then the end can be the beginning. Thanks for the art and sharing those thought in poetry.
Your poem is very thought provoking and your drawing is wonderful, Audrey. Thank you for sharing your creativity.
Love the quote at the end.
You've penned a lovely piece here, full of reflection and philosophy. You're right, there is much of everyone here; certainly it reflects many of my own thoughts. I regret much but try to move forward and make amends if I can.
If we learn from experience we can change the past a little or make amends, I believe. If we do learn and love as we go, then that shows wisdom and a certain grace of spirit.
Lovely words with a great message. You make us think deeply with this one. I salute your verses and the rhythm of your thoughts.
Ann
Nicely done Audrey. I often reflect upon my past life and would change many things that I had done or said. The life we live now is most important and we will do so until it is our time to leave, Hopefully we will leave a good legacy for our family to take pride in and to inspire them to go on and meet challenges faced each day.I so enjoyed your work. Many blessings my friend. whonu
Audrey, your poem is wonderful, thoughtful and the sketch looks so very much like a dear friend who turned 100 in June of this year. At this age he has lost his wife and most of his friends. He has lived his life well and says he has no regrets, but he wants to go home and be reunited with his loved ones.
I try not to think to much about the grander scheme else I become depressed but I loved your poem. I do believe I have a very specific purpose on this earth. Your art is as beautiful as your poem. You are very talented...writer, singer, artist!
An intelligent and reflective poem, Audrey. Life is so fleeting and we often sit back and contemplate how we have lived it and if we have done anything worthwhile. Like Rinita, I also like the sketches you included.
Such a thoughtful article. I loved Søren Kierkegaard's sage comment.
This is deep with a powerful ending. Totally loved this stanza
"Transparent life its ups and downs
Lay before me patterns bold
Have I passed the endless tests
Will my soul be laid to rest"
Oh, and that sketch in the beginning is beautiful!
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