Rain Falls
Rain falls, early morning light
Zephyrs breathe, breath down my neck
The Goddess of the Sun
Woven of radiant threads
Speaks to me,
With words of the changes to come
Charting through this darkness
My world has become
Eloquent skies above... radiate,
The beauty I've always loved
Shadows reflect... the vastness of my eyes
Through the prisms, of infinite skies
Rain falls, early morning light
Zephyrs breathe, breath down my neck
Rain falls, early morning light
Zephyrs breathe, breath down my neck
Charting this darkness
I see souls disguised
The Goddess of the Sun, opens my eyes
Washing away... the darkness in disguise
The songbird listens, while singing it's song
Ringing it's voice, as the clouds wipe away,
The darkness in disguise
The prisms of the infinite - rest
Rain falls, early morning light
Zephyrs breathe, breath down my neck
© 2018 Mitchell Marso
I never went to film school...
Mitchell Marso (author) from Mankato, MN on June 03, 2018:
Yeah... I so misinterpreted that. All apologies, brother!!!
I should follow more people who are similar to me. Thank you for the suggestions. I will be doing that.
manatita44 from london on June 01, 2018:
Sorry, my Friend.
Perhaps my wording is wrong. I'm saying that works of such beauty should be shared. Personal choice, of course.
All the people I mentioned are Hubber Friends. There are more. I gave you a sample that might like your exquisite and sublime style.
I told Ioannis the same thing and he thought it a great idea.
Some he was already following. It is a personal choice, of course.
I like to share with people that appreciate our work and I appreciate theirs. Your work is high quality and worthy to be shared. Much Love.
Mitchell Marso (author) from Mankato, MN on May 31, 2018:
I'm not sure on how to interpret that...
I can remove this if that's what you're implying.
manatita44 from london on May 30, 2018:
Cool! The repititon is excellent! The lyrics flowed well. You have a unique voice. Get some friends.
Ioannis arvanitis, Dora, Gypsy RoseLee, Tim Truzi Venkatachi M and other indians, Cam and Frank, the Linda's ... some more.
Mitchell Marso (author) from Mankato, MN on May 30, 2018:
Thank you. Very much. I'm happy that you like it. I wasn't able to do anymore fancy things to the video other than some semi-correlating slides. The birds in the background are a friends actual birds, and he played the flute. It all just happened that day. I felt it fitting for your song.
manatita44 from london on May 29, 2018:
A most exquisite and beautiful poem and song with music too. As soothing as the rain, my brother. A superb piece of writing and a great song. Gratitude ...gratitude ... gratitude.
