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Poetic Brook

poetic-brook

Poetic brook


In my valley of expressions,
when the heavy air rises,
the clouds that form, darken,
causing humid haze.

The brook flows incessantly towards the plains,
drenching with a downstream of pristine notion,
enriching my plain world with life lessons,
for a poetic re-incarnation.


© 2020 Hari Prasad S

Comments

Sharmila Krishnaswamy on August 02, 2020:

Water is life! Very well written Hari!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on August 01, 2020:

Thank you devika. The pic was taken by me. It's suited best for the poem so used it here. :-)

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on July 20, 2020:

I like the image and this is a great thought about water.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on July 19, 2020:

Thank you John for the wonderful appreciation :-)

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on July 19, 2020:

Thank you Ann for you visit and appreciation. :-)

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on July 19, 2020:

Hari, your poetry flows like the brook. You capture a scene in just a few words.

Ann Carr from SW England on July 19, 2020:

Lovely imagery.

Ann

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on July 18, 2020:

Audrey thank you for the appreciation. Yes you are so very right, nature is always showing us ways to understand life.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on July 18, 2020:

Thanks Vasantha. You are right. It's flow that nature always recommends.

Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on July 18, 2020:

Nature offers us unlimited lessons if we are still, open-minded, and listen. A very lovely poem, my friend.

artistry from Bangalore on July 18, 2020:

Beautiful poetry Hari, water gives inspiration to pen down thoughts.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on July 18, 2020:

Water does bring life to things. Your poetry is beautiful.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on July 18, 2020:

Thank you ruby. Yes the brook does have that soothing effect

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on July 18, 2020:

Thank you Lorna for the wonderful appreciation

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on July 18, 2020:

This is uniquely beautiful, especially the reincarnation. The flow of a brook calms and regenerates the soul.

Lorna Lamon on July 18, 2020:

This poem is so peaceful Hari and beautifully expressed.

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