Poetic Version- Determiners
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Determiners
Jump from the weakness, Jump from the hustle
Jump from the sorrows, Jump from the opinions
Jump from the failures, Jump from the soft-hearted
glimmering future will sudden arrive
Give some happiness which belongs to you
Give some credit which belongs to you
Give some appreciation, which belongs to you
no matter what, become a determiner
Make some efforts to reach your goal
Make some paths to reach your goal
Make some possibilities to reach your goal
cutting the edge of failure is only your goal
See the light in every dark tunnel at the end
See the mind in every dark time in the end
See the tonic in every loss of energy at the end
building your time begins now
Push yourself to achieve more in the crowd
Push yourself to be the one admirable in the crowd
Push yourself to be standing alone in the crowd
flash yourself throughout the journey of your life
Comments
RUBENA TALWAR (author) from sonipat on June 22, 2019:
thank you so much ma'am
Lorna Lamon on June 22, 2019:
This is a thought provoking and powerful poem.
