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Poetic Version- Determiners

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Determiners

Jump from the weakness, Jump from the hustle

Jump from the sorrows, Jump from the opinions

Jump from the failures, Jump from the soft-hearted

glimmering future will sudden arrive


Give some happiness which belongs to you

Give some credit which belongs to you

Give some appreciation, which belongs to you

no matter what, become a determiner


Make some efforts to reach your goal

Make some paths to reach your goal

Make some possibilities to reach your goal

cutting the edge of failure is only your goal


See the light in every dark tunnel at the end

See the mind in every dark time in the end

See the tonic in every loss of energy at the end

building your time begins now


Push yourself to achieve more in the crowd

Push yourself to be the one admirable in the crowd

Push yourself to be standing alone in the crowd

flash yourself throughout the journey of your life

Comments

RUBENA TALWAR (author) from sonipat on June 22, 2019:

thank you so much ma'am

Lorna Lamon on June 22, 2019:

This is a thought provoking and powerful poem.