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Poem: You're Too Much

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You're Too Much

You're too sweet,

My tongue tastes you,

Taste buds lose touch,

Familiar flavours new.


You're too hot,

With sweat comes flood,

No need for flirt,

You pump up my blood.


You're too cool,

Make me crazy shiver,

Can't stay still,

With all my quivers.


You're too funny,

Feeling feather all day,

I'm a laughing gas,

In a balloon that floats up, up and away.


You're too sexy,

You always slay,

Even when you're away,

Your scent seems to stay.


You're too much,

I don't know what to say.


Poem Meaning

You're too sweet

My tongue tastes you

Taste buds lose touch

Familiar flavours new.

Your special someone is so sweet that your tongue loses its other senses.


You're too hot

With sweat comes flood

No need for flirt

You pump up my blood.

Your special someone is so hot that you sweat profusely. You don't even need her or him to approach you. You already feel that your blood pressure is rising.


You're too cool

Make me crazy shiver

Can't stay still

With all my quivers.

You're intimidated by the coolness of your special someone. He or she makes you nervous and fidgety.


You're too funny

Feeling feather all day

I'm a laughing gas

In a balloon that floats up, up and away.

Your special someone makes you laugh a lot that you feel giddy and light. Feeling feather means that you feel tickled.


You're too sexy

You always slay

Even when you're away

Your scent seems to stay.

Your special someone is so sexy that he or she makes you desire for him or her to stay. The symbolic meaning of scent is desire.


You're too much

I don't know what to say.

You are speechless because your special someone is perfect to you.

If you are/were in love with someone...

© 2018 Li-Jen Hew

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