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Poem: You Will Sense Me One Day Again

Updated on August 10, 2016
Tides of time pass. Yet, everlasting memories remain with thee.
Tides of time pass. Yet, everlasting memories remain with thee.

You will sense me one day again

When, Where and How? I know not,

But our rendezvous is preordained.

Perhaps I will become a

Creation of your creativity

And maybe, pouring myself

Through the ink of your pen

In a melodious verse

On the milky leaves of your diary,

I will rest on your lips.


Perhaps I will become a leisurely

Breeze in the warm summer,

And gently blowing the

Moisture off from your temples,

I will embrace your Soul, and

Endearingly kiss your breath.

I know not when, where and how –

But you will sense

My presence for sure;


Maybe I will turn into raindrops

Of first rain from spring,

Jewelled on your lips and eyelids,

Calmly drizzling down on your skin

And passing through your pores –

I will rub my coolness on

Your flaming chest;

Look closely then, there will be traces of

Moistness of love, not yet dry.


Perchance we shall

Meet again, yet this flesh

Will grow old with me;

‘Twill will perish into ashes,

But the imperishable beads of memory

Are knitted with a sacred thread;

I will dive deep to collect those beads,

Knit those beads of breath,

And you will sense me yet again.

© 2015 Surabhi Kaura

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      John Hansen 14 months ago from Queensland Australia

      What a wonderful poem Surabhi. I like the thought our love ones never really leave us, but manifest themselves in many different ways...like ink, or a breeze. 'raindrops... drizzling down on your skin and passing through your pores...etc" is actually very erotic. Very well done, loved it.

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thank you, dear Jodah. I am glad you like it.

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      Hari Prasad S 14 months ago from Bangalore

      very beautiful forms of love getting manifested on us. nicely written with simple words unlike your usual poetry.

      excellent. (as usual)

      - hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thanks, Hari. Glad you appreciated.

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      Shaloo Walia 14 months ago

      I loved the images you have created with your words...Beautiful!

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      manatita44 14 months ago from london

      Incredibly beautiful and with simplicity yet expressing great power and depth. A superb poem! In fact, a masterpiece! Way to go!

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      Colleen Swan 14 months ago from County Durham

      A beautiful poem, it has it all, sadness, hope, memories, desire. Excellent construction. Colleen

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      Shubhro Sen 14 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      extraordinary.

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thanks - Shaloo, Manatita, Colleen and Subjugator. Appreciate it. Peace.

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      Venkatachari M 14 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Wonderful poem with beautiful descriptions. It's so much appealing!

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      stella vadakin 14 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Hi, like your poem it gives a good description.

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thank you Venkatachari ji and ladyguitarpicker. I appreciate it :)

    • Siddharth 14 months ago

      hey sweety!! you write from heart......blessed soul

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      A most wonderful poem. Love the thought of those imperishable beads of memory.

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thanks Siddharth and Gypsy. Appreciations. Om Shanti.

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      Sakshi Davessar 14 months ago from Punjab, India

      beautiful poem ! greatly explained

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thank you, Sakshi. Lots of Love :)

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      Word 14 months ago from Chicago

      Charming sensuality as deep as it gets!

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      Surabhi Kaura 13 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Thank you, Al. That's so sweet of you, my friend.

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