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Poem: Wave Away Trauma

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Wave Away Trauma

Sweet moments spared some time,

Like everything else that perishes,

What was once cherished lost its shine,

Unknowingly bitter in the end.


A wave of emotions crashes down my spine,

Washing shock over my veins,

The effect of the crash echoes disturbingly,

Carrying feverish fears and pain.


Crashes still put us to a halt,

The end is a beginning,

Waves roll more confidently than ever,

Absorbing sun rays with newer strength.


© 2019 Li-Jen Hew

Comments

Li-Jen Hew (author) on April 12, 2020:

Thanks Umesh!

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on April 12, 2020:

Mice one Li. Good compisition.

Li-Jen Hew (author) on January 15, 2020:

Thanks Donna! Experience helps us too.

Donna Rayne from Sparks, Nevada on January 14, 2020:

I loved this poem, very well written!

All my best,

Donna Rayne

Li-Jen Hew (author) on January 05, 2020:

Thanks Nithya! Yup, a roller coaster!

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on January 01, 2020:

Life is a roller coaster ride of emotions, we have to go with the flow and keep going. Nicely written!

Li-Jen Hew (author) on December 20, 2019:

Hey Bill. Thanks for the wish and same to you!

Li-Jen Hew (author) on December 20, 2019:

Hi Hari. Thanks for sharing your perspective on the poem using your own poem. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Li-Jen Hew (author) on December 20, 2019:

Hey Frank. Long time no see. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment!

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on December 16, 2019:

I don't see anything new from you, so I'll just wish you a wonderful week ahead.

Hari Prasad S from Bangalore on December 06, 2019:

Fallen has risen,

so be thy nature.

Cool lines. Great times ahead. Enjoyed your poem Li.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on December 05, 2019:

Li-Jen.. wow I really enjoyed this poem .. I really did

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 27, 2019:

Thanks for your comment, Rinita. I'm glad that the words managed to make you stronger, even just a bit. That's also a nice metaphor. You find the sea healing.

Rinita Sen on November 15, 2019:

Li-Jen, every time I visit one of your poems I leave a little bit stronger than I was. Such is the power of your words. The analogy between the depth of sorrow and sea waves touches me as I find the sea to be quite healing. I especially adore the last line, with the waves gaining new strength, but my favorite part is with the waves of emotions washing shock over veins - exquisitely poetic, that.

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 09, 2019:

Hi Manatita. I missed you all too! Haha, the crash is for something better. Thank you for your concern and comment!

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 09, 2019:

Hi Sean. You were able to correlate by giving the diamond example. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 09, 2019:

Hey Jodah. Cool that you're able to compare emotions with waves. Thanks for the comment!

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 09, 2019:

Blessings to you too, Bill! Thanks for feeling!

manatita44 from london on November 09, 2019:

Missed you Sis.

Have you suffered a crash? Hope you are stronger now. Good poetry.

Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on November 09, 2019:

My dear Li-Jen, you are growing up through difficulties, like all we do. But, I can already see a great blessing that those difficulties have offered you. The pressure helps the carbon to become a diamond, a beautiful crystal ( Li Ching). Your talent shines! Thank you for sharing!

May every end be a blessing to you!

Sean

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on November 09, 2019:

Yes, Li-Jen, emotions often sweep through like waves ebbing and flowing...happy, sad, bitter, grateful etc...I guess that is part of life. We have to accept the sorrow to also feel the joy. Well-written.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on November 09, 2019:

Anyone who "feels" will get something out of this poem. We all share so many similarities. Pain is pain...happiness is happiness...loss is loss...I can relate.

Blessings to you always!

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 09, 2019:

Thanks Iqra. Welcome to my page.

Iqra from Pakistan on November 09, 2019:

Well I really like the connection you make between affairs of the heart...

nicely written

Li-Jen Hew (author) on November 09, 2019:

Hi Mary, thanks! Yeah, I hope the reader is able to feel connected to others who feel the same way.

Mary Norton from Ontario, Canada on November 09, 2019:

I feel the emotions that you expressed in this poem, Li Jen. We all have gone through something like this.