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Poem: Trance

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

Poem Summary

Trance is a poem about when she looks his way. It is like he is under her spell. He feels excitement in his veins. He cannot wait until she fuels the fire igniting the flames..

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"Under Your Spell Again" by Waylon Jennings

"Trance"

When her eyes glance his way,

a fire burns

melting his heart.


Excitement pours through his veins,

he gets a fever

boiling hot.


Like a deer in headlights

he is in her trance,

under her spell.


Waiting for the moment

she ignites the fire,

fueling the flames

of burning desire.

" Luke Bryan - What She Wants Tonight"

© 2020 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 08, 2020:

Miebakagh,

Thank you

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 08, 2020:

Ms. Dora,

Thank you.

I can always count on you to go straight to the point.

Thank you for your kindness.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 08, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you so much for your kindness.

I do hope this benefits us writers in a good way.

Maybe we just haven't seen the big picture yet...that silver lining.

I hope it all gets worked all soon.

I love how you take gentlesness and paint a beautiful scene with your words.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 08, 2020:

Lora,

Thank you.

Your words warm my heart. I love finding out my words describe these details.

The song by Luke Bryan really fits this one.

Have a great day.

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on October 08, 2020:

I agree.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on October 08, 2020:

Short, sweet and straight to the passion. Beautiful poetry!

Lorna Lamon on October 08, 2020:

Thank you Brenda and I hope this issue is rectified soon as there are many articles I now cannot comment on. I feel we have to rush to comment, otherwise the article is moved very quickly. I always enjoy your poetry Brenda which is inspiring and heartfelt.

Lora Hollings on October 07, 2020:

You certainly capture the passion that acts as a magnet between people in your poem, Brenda. You make this feeling palpable with your evocative verse. A great write! I love the song too.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Risina,

Thank you so much.

I am glad you enjoyed it. I will get to reading your in the morning.

Have a pleasant night.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you for your visit.

The effect of a trance can really pull at one's heart.

Rosina S Khan on October 07, 2020:

Two lovers or better still, soul mates would be in a trance feeling strong emotions towards each other just like the way you describe in your poem. Great writing, Brenda. Really enjoyed it.

Lorna from USA on October 07, 2020:

The power of attraction and desire made people feel like they are in a trance. Thanks Brenda for sharing this poem.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Bill,

I am delighted to hear my words made you reminisce.

So glad you found that special magic.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Miebakagh,

Thank you so much for your wonderful words of kindness.

Enjoy your day!

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on October 07, 2020:

Brenda, I have read the various comments and I agreed with all the visitors. We love you and your poems.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on October 07, 2020:

It was like that the day I met Bev. I could not get her out of my mind from that moment on. :) Thanks for the reminder of that magical moment.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Lorna,

As you know...I can not comment on your work with this new way of doing things.

Just know that I believe your writing is superb & touches the hearts if many.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Peggy,

I do wish I could comment on your work but you know the problem.

Maybe there is a better purpose that we cannot see...hopefully for us writers.

Enjoy your day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Peggy,

Thank you so much for your kind words.

I love the way you describe it.

Have a great day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Vanita,

Thank you.

I appreciate you letting me know about reading my work. I am delighted you enjoy them.

This comment problem is affecting all of us.

I cannot comment on your work either.

Have a great day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Miebakagh,

Thank you so much for your kindness.

Happy to see you dropping by for a read.

Take care.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 07, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you.

I am delighted to know the wirds are poweful enough to leave an image in your head. The power of tiny words is amazing.

Have a great day!

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on October 07, 2020:

Attraction and desire are superbly built into a crescendo of a firestorm in your well-crafted poem.

Vanita Thakkar on October 07, 2020:

Good one - the spell of attraction.

I read some of your poems, but as commenting is disabled, could not write.

Loved reading them all, marked by an intensity that stands out.

Love and regards to you, dear Brenda.

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on October 07, 2020:

I like the poem because it express 'trance' in a beautiful and thought provocating way. Much thanks.

Lorna Lamon on October 07, 2020:

An evocative poem filled with the power of attraction. Beautifully written - full of emotion. Loved it.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 06, 2020:

Nithya,

Thank you.

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on October 06, 2020:

Lovely, in trance. Beautiful!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 06, 2020:

Ankita,

Thank you.

I appreciate that.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 06, 2020:

Anupam,

Thank you.

Ankita B on October 06, 2020:

Very beautifully penned. I loved it, Brenda.

Anupam Mitu from MUMBAI on October 06, 2020:

beautiful trance dear