A Collection of Poems: Silence On The Move
Silence On The Move
Silence in the library
Snoozing books nestle in shelves,
Readers read but think out loud,
Their minds boom with knowledge,
But quietness creeps to the edge.
Silence on the train
Cold is the train when you feel alone,
No heat absorbed among self-absorbed passengers,
Across the crowd you catch a smile,
Your heart melts at the kindness of a stranger.
Silence is wisdom
We control the choices we make,
Silence ripens the fruit of wisdom,
Gives you time to taste,
Before you swallow freedom.
Silence is understanding
Silence clears the clouded mind,
Banishes the ego,
To obtain real insight,
Vanishes future rows.
Silence teaches strength
Don’t expect comfort like the breeze,
Silence is a subtle kindness,
Makes your heart adapt like sails,
To changing winds.
Silence appreciates the moment
Silence is a soft gaze,
At the birth of a moment,
Till the beauty fades,
But fragrance remains within.
© 2019 Li-Jen Hew
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AUTHORThank you Mary. You're right!
Li-Jen, I love these especially the last one. We so much need silence but we are not at home in it. We fill it up instead of appreciating its value.
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Thank you Sean, for the support! If readers are able to relate to the poem and be inspired, I'm thankful! Appreciate your feedback on my progress and your mention of Manatita.
Excellent and wise work, my sweet Li-Jen! I am so proud of your skill improvement. You have written a sublime poem here, and I think Manatita will be also proud of you! Thank you for this gift, because it is a gift the chance to read such great work!
Keep on climbing on your talent's mountain!
Sean
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Hey Shaloo! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Hi Bill, I didn't think of the title in terms of sound! Good point! Thanks for the feedback!
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Hi Adnan, thank you for visiting and glad that you found some inspiration!
Beautiful and innovative!!
Of course I enjoyed your poems, but the line that stood out, for me, was the title of the article...."Silence on the Move"....that is a brilliant line, giving a motor skill to the lack of sound. Perfect!
Silence sure has some glaring characteristics...and this verse beautifully portrays all that it bears...and my mind was really absorbed in thoughts over the line," Silence appreciates the moment"... So very true...sometimes silence is the key to appreciation in situations when words don't have a way...It was a delight...reading this fine piece...loved it...Thanks for sharing !!
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Hi Lorna. Thank you for your comment. Glad you enjoyed it and welcome to my page.
I enjoyed reading this lovely collections of poems on the different types of silence and their effects. I loved the last poem and the line 'Silence is a soft gaze' - beautiful.
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Thank you Hari. That's a generous "all over" haha.
Beautiful thoughts all over.
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Thanks Jodah. I look forward to see you present the theme in your poem, in various ways as well. All of you are more experienced than me and able to vomit out the ways!
Very interesting describing the various types of silence, Li-Jen. An effective presentation of this poetry. Well done.
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