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Poem: Secret Feelings

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Secret Feelings

She walks in a daze,
hoping he doesn’t realize
the torment she feels,
hiding beneath the familiar pain
of heartbreak.

Realizing he is pretending
to be someone he is not,
hiding behind his words
with his agendas
banning her from public view,
attempting to keep her secret
with a heart that is untrue.

Yearning to be free
from this nice girl label
he pinned on her years ago,
she shows him a secret
hoping to fulfill his craving,
fine tuning his heart to hers,
hoping he understands
it's unique importance.

"Broken" by Seether and Amy Lee from Evanescence

© 2020 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 28, 2020:

Ms. Dora,

Yes, tis very true.

Secrets really are unnecessary burdens for life is too short.

The heart is amazing though to keep up the hope.

Thanks for reading.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on February 28, 2020:

Amazing how secret feelings can control an individual and create unnecessary struggle. Still, the heart hopes.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 27, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you.

Glad you think this poem is great.

Have a wonderful day!

Lorna from USA on February 27, 2020:

While reading the title of your poem, I thought it's about a love of a woman towards a man that was keep secret from him.

What a true characterization of an unfaithful man. Great poem Brenda! Thanks for sharing!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

Manatita44,

Yes, i believe you are correct.

Enjoy your evening.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

Nella,

Thank you so much!

Enjoy your day.

manatita44 from london on February 26, 2020:

Yes, sometimes the allure is stronger on the feminine side, to keeps the Heart from wandering, I suppose. We humans can be easily diverted.

Nella DiCarlo from Guelph, Ontario on February 26, 2020:

Interesting well written poem Brenda. Shows how complicated feelings and situations can be

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

Kyler,

Awe...I can see your confusion.

None of the above.

He wants to keep her secret so he has options if he wants too...like having other women desire him without them being aware he has a lady at home.

So glad you thought it was beautiful though.

Have a great day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

Mark,

Thank you so very much.

Enjoy your day.

Kyler J Falk from Corona, CA on February 26, 2020:

A very beautiful poem, Brenda, though I think I am struggling to understand the relationship between the two. Why is she a secret? A mistress, he is over-controlling, he is ashamed, she is ashamed of her own sexuality?

I need to know more.

Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on February 26, 2020:

I enjoyed the truth and vulnerability in this poem. Very effective.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

Ruby,

Thank you.

I am so glad my words do this poem justice.

Thanks for reading.

Have a blessed day.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

Lorna,

I am delighted to hear you like the way I capture the moments in my work.

Thank you.

Enjoy your day.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 26, 2020:

John,

Thank you.

Have a great day.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on February 26, 2020:

Secret feelings hidden away. You captured the agony perfectly.

Lorna Lamon on February 26, 2020:

A thought provoking poem Brenda - there is a sense of controlling behaviour and fear within these lines. Once again you have captured the moment really well. Great writing.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on February 26, 2020:

Good job, Brenda. Those secret feelings can be complicated.