Poem: Lovestruck

Updated on January 13, 2020
Brenda Arledge profile image

I am a writer. I love to write. I feel words have a way of connecting people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

"Can't Help Falling In Love" by Elvis Presley


Like a thunderstorm in the dead of night
she is struck by the lightening bolt
of his love.

It’s hard to imagine
his magnetic hold
is pulling her closer,
when she usually plays it safe
protecting her heart.

It’s as though
she is spellbound
throwing caution to the wind,
like fate is answering
an unknown wish she made long ago.

The storm is gaining strength
whisking her away like debris
swirling in a tornado.

"You Got A Way With Me" Shania Twain

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      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR


        7 days ago from Washington Court House


        Thank you for a lovely comment.

        Have a great day!

      • Harishprasad profile image

        Harish Mamgain 

        7 days ago from New Delhi , India

        Words "Love know no bounds " are so true. You have portrayed it all so well in these beautiful lines. The simile of debris is also so apt. Brenda, love reading this lovely composition.

      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR


        11 days ago from Washington Court House

        Dream On,

        Thank you. It is difficult for me to write longer poetry.

        I am delighted to know I get my point across in the few words I write.

        I think love just might drive me wild...lol.

        So glad you stopped by again...stop by to read my work anytime.

        Thank you.

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        DREAM ON 

        11 days ago

        Once again you have captured so much and just a few beautiful words. The feelings and the thoughts fighting each other but at the same time giving in. Another one of my favorites. Thank you and may love always drive you wild.

      • manatita44 profile image


        12 days ago from london

        Truly romantic piece enhanced by such a beautiful voice in the video. Exquisite!

      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR


        13 days ago from Washington Court House


        Yes. Something about it makes you feel a little excitement deep inside.

        Thank you for remembering and leaving a comment.

      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR


        13 days ago from Washington Court House


        That's great! A wonderful feeling.

        Thanks for reading.

        Enjoy your memories and have a nice day.

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        Kari Poulsen 

        13 days ago from Ohio

        Hi Brenda. I remember that feeling, knowing you shouldn't but doing it anyway.

      • Nell Rose profile image

        Nell Rose 

        13 days ago from England

        Yes I remember that thunderbolt happening to me many moons ago, LOL! loved it!

      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR


        2 weeks ago from Washington Court House


        Thank you.

        Glad you like it.

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        Lorna Lamon 

        2 weeks ago

        I loved the last verse of this exciting poem Brenda. Great imagery.

      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR


        2 weeks ago from Washington Court House


        Thank you.

      • Nella DiCarlo profile image

        Nella DiCarlo 

        2 weeks ago from Guelph, Ontario

        Energetic and passionate poem. Enjoyed it.


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