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Poem: Love Vanished in a Lie

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

"Don't Lie To Me" by Barbara Streisand


Embodying love
Once heartfelt
Vanished in a lie.

Deep feelings
No longer strong
Hidden within this broken heart.

Meaningless words
Not worthy of my time
Observing your actions
Speak a louder truth.

Time only knows
If the remaining love
Will be enough.

"Your Love is A Lie"



BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 16, 2020:

Dream On,

I love the way you describe what you want with your words like a simple slow ball right over home plate...that is awesome.

This is something that happened awhile back but still dealing with in the present day with the lie trying to convince me it was a mistake.

I am delighted you enjoy reading my work.

I am quite the dreamer.

Enjoy your life. I hope you know how to catch curve balls.

DREAM ON on January 16, 2020:

I think everyone has experienced your pain. You know how to dig into the gut without even throwing a punch. Your words are real. Is this a thought from your past or something you are going through? I wish you the best and hope it all works out. Life keeps throwing me curve balls when all I want is a simple slow ball right over the plate. So I can connect and knock it out of the park. What I can't do in real life I tend to dream. Thank you for sharing. I enjoy your work. Keep writing and keep pushing those hot buttons.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 09, 2020:


I appreciate your kindness and enthusiasm.

I am delighted to know you enjoy my work.

May this new year bring you much happiness.

Donna Rayne from Greenwood, In on January 09, 2020:


This is a beautiful poem but, I felt an intense heartache and wow! Splendid job in moving of one's emotions. You are such a wonderful poetess!

Blessings to you always my friend,

Donna Rayne