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Poem: Love Scars

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"Killing Me Softly" by Roberta Flack

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"Love Scars"

She feels the pain
of a love so deep,
carved into the fibers of her heart,
etched forever,
from the one
who broke her soul.

Trusting her every breathe,
only to be suffocated
within his lies,
tormented forever,
with his love
playing in her mind.

"Your Love Kills Me" by The Veer Union

© 2020 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 27, 2020:

Donna,

Thank you for such a kind compliment.

May happiness and good health be with you.

Donna Rayne from Greenwood, In on March 27, 2020:

Beautifully written. I just love reading your poetry. Lovely as usual!

Blessings,

Donna Rayne

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Suchismita,

Thank you so much!

Delighted to see you.

Suchismita Pradhan from India on March 26, 2020:

Beautifuly crafted.I can feel the pain behind the scars.Thanks for sharing.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Ruby,

Thank you.

I am delighted to hear you love this one.

Let's hope the scars heal.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Mitara,

Thank you for such wonderful observations and comments.

Have a great day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Vidya,

Thank you for reading my work.

I appreciate your comments.

I am delighted my words are strong enough to make one feel.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on March 26, 2020:

Brenda, I bet we all have scars, I know I do, but they are healed. That's not to say that they remain in the psyche a lifetime. I loved your poem.

Mitara N from South Africa on March 26, 2020:

Powerful,

For someone to come into another's life, being reckless with the heart, never deserved such a love like that in the first place,

sounds like she was worth so much more than she gives herself credit for...

Time heals, but is never forgotten

VIDYA D SAGAR on March 26, 2020:

A very touching poem, Brenda. We can feel the pain of her broken heart and the scars that never really heal.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Jason,

You are correct.

I think sometimes they never heal. It just becomes part of our new life with more walls of protection built.

Thanks and stay safe.

Keep writing.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you.

I do believe we all have a few scars that never really heal.

Our hearts are fragile.

Thanks for reading.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Thank you Manatita44.

Yes...the scars are deep. You have touched this once in a lifetime.

Delighted you enjoyed the video.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 26, 2020:

Umesh,

Thank you so very much!

Please stay safe and keep on writing.

Jason Nicolosi from AZ on March 26, 2020:

Loves scars cut the deepest and usually take a long time to heal. Although sometimes they never heal. Beautifully written Brenda.

Lorna Lamon on March 26, 2020:

Scars that never really heal and as your poem says "carved into the fibers of her heart". Beautiful yet tragic. Loved it Brenda.

manatita44 from london on March 26, 2020:

Leaves scars all right. Very deep scars. I like Roberta Flack. She was a friend of the Centre and played for us at our annual pilgrimages in New York.

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on March 26, 2020:

Nice composition.