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Poem: Life Moves On

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"I'm Moving On" by Rascal Flatts

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She hates that sinking feeling
in the pit of her stomach
reminding her she cannot go backwards
for nothing can ever be the same.

Forcing her to go by a different set of rules
with the future in sight,
making a life for herself,
hoping to keep a few familiar faces
along the way.

She is sad her old life,
the one she had grown accustomed to,
is behind her
but she feels happy
to be in a place
where she feels at home.

"What Hurts The Most" by Rascal Flatts

© 2019 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 30, 2019:

Thank you, Nell.

Delighted to hear you love it.

Happy New Year!

Nell Rose from England on December 30, 2019:

I love it's simplicity, but explains the emotion so well. I think we all know that feeling sometimes in our lives. Love it!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 28, 2019:

Manatita44,

Thank you.

Yes, the rules in one's life can be changed.

Glad you like it.

Thank you.

manatita44 from london on December 28, 2019:

She can change the rules or create a new set, like chess. I like that. Intriguing!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 27, 2019:

Thank you, Donna for such a thoughtful reply and idea.

I am delighted you love this one.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 27, 2019:

Thank you Ms. Dora.

Focusing on the happy moments help one to get through.

Thanks for reading.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 27, 2019:

Thank you so much Ruby.

It is a joy to have you reading my work.

Thank you.

Donna Rayne from Greenwood, In on December 27, 2019:

Perhaps she can hold onto a trinket of yesterday and put it in a locket to remind herself where she has been, who help her along the way and looking through that frosted windows of yesterday with the courage to move forth with happy memories not too far away that waits for her smile to welcome them...

Beautiful poem, I love it!

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on December 27, 2019:

True life goes on. We can focus on the glad to help it outweigh the sad. Good thoughts.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on December 27, 2019:

It's difficult to start over again, but sometimes there's no turning back. Thought provoking poem, and I loved it.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 27, 2019:

Lorna,

Thank you.

Yes, no matter what we do...time moves on and if we do not there is no peace within our soul.

Thanks for reading.

Lorna Lamon on December 27, 2019:

A timeless poem Brenda reminding us that time does move on and even though it is not easy to let go, sometimes it is the only way to inner peace. Loved it.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 26, 2019:

Crezyl,

Your comment leaves me a bit confused.

I am happy you think it is a good poem.

This has no reflection on your life...written from my own heart.

Crezyl Joy Villa Sabrido from Philippines on December 26, 2019:

I go beyond normal Brenda, I know I wasn't wrong, I was just pacing different path, and I am happy with it. Good poem ❤

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 26, 2019:

Thanks Clive.

You are right...change brings us new opportunities.

Clive Williams from Jamaica on December 26, 2019:

Change is sometimes a good thing.