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Poem: Letting the Walls Down

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Poem Summary

Letting the walls down is a poem about a woman protecting her heart by building walls. Living her life in a dream world not wanting to feel despair. When he crosses her path she wants to take a chance. She lets the walls crumble putting her love on the line hoping he finds her this time .

"Ready To Take A Chance Again" by Barry Manilow

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Letting The Walls Down

She lives her life hidden away
like a snail under a rock,
hoping to find shelter
in her own little dream world.

Refusing to partake
in a world full of fake people
that bring heartache and pain,
leaving her lost in despair.

Then he crosses her path
speaking words of love,
fascinating her soul
making her want to feel alive,
willing to take a chance
even if she fails.

She can feel
the walls around her heart crumbling,
no longer playing it safe
as she puts her love on the line
hoping this time he finds her.

"Ready To Love Again" by Lady Antebellum

© 2019 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 23, 2021:

Peggy,

I see so many people build walls trying to protect their heart from more hurt, but you are right...it is worth the risk to let love inside.

Enjoy your day today.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on January 23, 2021:

One has to let their walls down to allow love to enter. The reward is worth the risk.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 22, 2021:

Taking a chance on love even if she fails.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 15, 2019:

Kari,

Me too!

Thanks for your kind words.

Kari Poulsen from Ohio on December 15, 2019:

I look forward to the day I will let my walls down. This is a beautifully, hopeful poem

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 10, 2019:

Jason,

Thank you so much for reading my work.

I am delighted to know this one paints a picture...thanks!

Jason Nicolosi from AZ on December 10, 2019:

You have painted a wonderful picture with words. When I read the poem it was like I could see it playing out in my mind. Great job.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 10, 2019:

Manatita44,

Yeah...sometimes that is impossible.

Thanks for reading.

manatita44 from london on December 10, 2019:

Beautiful piece. Guard the heart wisely. Ha ha.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 09, 2019:

Crezyl,

I feel you are right!

When you are falling in love it seems impossible to protect one's heart.

Thank you for reading.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 09, 2019:

Kathy,

Thank you so much!

I am glad this poem portrays the feeling of hope.

I love Lady Antebellum too.

Thanks for reading.

Crezyl from Philippines on December 09, 2019:

I am protecting my heart too. But when my heart is in love, I can't control it no matter how much I try. This is a lovely poem!

Kathy Henderson from Pa on December 09, 2019:

Brenda,

Beautiful poem, truth, love is a leap of faith in all instances and this poem encourages hope in the leap. I also love Lady Antebellum, thanks for sharing.