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Poem: Is My Spirit Looking Upon Me?

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Poem Summary

Is my spirit looking upon me is a poem about her being doubled over with pain, feeling odd, but doesn't know what's wrong. She tries to respond to his questions, but the words do not come out. She attempts to make her way to the bedroom but suddenly sees herself lying on the kitchen floor. He helps her up saying he is always there for her.

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"Is My Spirit Looking Upon Me"

In the lavatory
doubled over,
relief not forthcoming,
sharp crushing pains
extending upward,
this awful feeling
in my chest.

Mind overthinking,
fearlessly attempting
to walk,
moaning in despair,
grasping my head
leaning against the couch
in a worried voice hearing him
fervently ask, “What is wrong, Hon?”

Unable to utter a word,
I stumble to walk
to the edge of the loveseat
with a twinge in my head,
feeling wavy inside,
determined to make my way
to the bedroom.

The next moment I see myself
lying motionless on the kitchen floor,
flat on my back.
How could this be?
Is my spirit looking upon me?
Instantaneously I feel a hand on my arm,
a tender loving voice in my ear
“Come on, Hon. Let me help you up.”

With his strong, helping hands,
concerned love in his voice,
he gently walks me to our bed
where I calmly rest
understanding his words,
he is always here for me.

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BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 02, 2021:

Can your spirit look down upon you?

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