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Poem: I Can Count On You

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

"Mom" by Garth Brooks

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I Can Count On You

I remember all the little things…
reading to me,
helping me with my words,
teaching me to color inside the lines,
tending to my owies,
I could always count on you.

It is refreshing to know,
you are still here with me
as an adult
allowing me to cry on your shoulder,
giving me advice,
sharing in my joys,
letting me count on you.

I feel blessed
to have a Mother who is so caring,
showing me how to be a better person,
who reaches out whenever I need a friend.

"My Mother, My Teacher, My Friend " by Owen Mac

© 2020 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on March 07, 2020:

Frogyfish,

So sorry to hear of her passing, but the memories will forever linger in your heart.

Thank you for your kind words.

frogyfish from Central United States of America on March 06, 2020:

Yes, I remember some long ago little things...corrective, helps and most of all unfailing love. Gone a long time, I think of her almost daily.

And that video song was amazing by that young man. Thanks for sharing your beautiful words.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 17, 2020:

Ms Dora,

Thank you so much!

I appreciate you reading.

Have a great day!

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on February 17, 2020:

Great story of the continual, caring, practical help of a mother. A deserving tribute!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 13, 2020:

Ruby,

Thank you.

It is hard to lose a mother, but you will carry her with you throughout each step of your days.

Thank you for reading.

Enjoy your day.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 13, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you.

I am very lucky to have her with me.

Each day I believe she is more active than I am.

A mother's love is very unique.

Thank you for reading.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on February 13, 2020:

Oh, how I miss my Mom, but she taught me right from wrong. Beautiful message Brenda..

Lorna Lamon on February 13, 2020:

A lovely tribute to your mum Brenda and you are so lucky to still have her with you. A mother's love is so precious and treasured. Beautiful words.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 12, 2020:

Rosina,

Thank you for your vote of confidence.

I always appreciate your comments.

Have a great day.

Rosina S Khan on February 12, 2020:

Brenda, this poem is different, a dedication to your Mom. I picture her as a generous woman always ready with a helping hand in your joys and sorrows. Lovely. Keep writing different kinds of poems and you will be more of a hit.