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Poem: Fields of Time

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

Poem Summary

Fields of time is a poem about remembering how passionate feelings spill innocently. The thrill of each second during the excitement of love. Like a romance novel not willing to let the other one go. Learning to coexist as one with love standing the test of time.

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Fields of Time

Walking through the fields of time

memories float to the surface,

remembering a moment

when passionate feelings

spill innocently.


Joy touching our youthful hearts

capturing each thrilling second,

challenging the excitement of love.


Blissfully happy,

strolling hand in hand

like characters from a romance novel,

not willing to let the other one go.


Finding a hidden secret,

learning to coexist as one,

reaping the rewards of a loving relationship

that stands up to the test of time.

"The Test Of Time by R. C. McLee

© 2021 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 11, 2021:

Relationships that stand the test of time.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 10, 2021:

Amani,

I hope you catch this one this time.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 08, 2021:

Rosina,

I loved the times when we were young and innocent too.

Take care.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 07, 2021:

Manatita44,

Thanks!

Memories could be another name for this one, but alas it sounds a bit boring.

Which would you read? Memories or Fields of Time?

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 07, 2021:

Sankhajit,

Thank you.

Enjoy your day.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 07, 2021:

Pamela,

Thank you.

I am glad you enjoyed this one.

Awe...true love is an excellent feeling but often difficult to find because people often settle for something less magical.

Take care.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 07, 2021:

Nithya,

I absolutely love that magical feeling that comes with love.

I'm a hopeless romantic which leads me down some difficult paths.

Take care.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 07, 2021:

Chitrangada,

Thank you for reading & commenting.

It is difficult to find a love that stands during these testing times, but it does exist.

So delighted you like this one.

Enjoy your day.

manatita44 from london on January 07, 2021:

Charming, sweet. Fields of Time could easily be another name for 'memories.' Touching!

Sankhajit Bhattacharjee from MILWAUKEE on January 07, 2021:

l enjoyed your poem

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 07, 2021:

I like this sweet poem about true love. I enjoyed reading it, and I appreciate your sharing it with all of us, Brenda.

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on January 07, 2021:

Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading. Each moment is magical when you are in love and especially if it is true love.

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on January 07, 2021:

Nice sentiments. It's true love, if it stands the test of time, or the testing times. Fortunate are those, who find this.

Thank you for sharing another wonderful poem.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 06, 2021:

Welcome back Amani,

This is my latest poem.

Enjoy.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 06, 2021:

Rosina,

Thank you.

You are right...there is no age limit.

Love bites when one least expects it.

Take care my friend.

Rosina S Khan on January 06, 2021:

Love when we were younger was innocent and blissfully happy. But there is no fixed age when you could fall for all over again. Thanks for sharing, Brenda.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on January 06, 2021:

Ramawatsdinesh,

Thank you.

I am delighted to see you reading my work.

Love definitely seems to be a big part of life.

Take care.

Ramawatsdinesh from Rajasthan on January 06, 2021:

Love means everything else is meaningless....

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