Poem: Etching in My Mind
Your manners and ways,
words spoken in haste,
no amount of love
will ever erase
this etching in my mind.
You created a wedge
between your heart and mine,
faded feelings
now drifting away
with time.
"Our Love is Fading Away" by Johnny Rion
© 2019 BRENDA ARLEDGE
Comments
So true, Brenda, without heartache there would be very few country and western songs.
- AUTHOR
Thank you, John.
I think we all can write sad poems, after all what would country and western music be without heartaches?
So glad you enjoyed the song. It is a little older and not too well known, but fitting.
Sad poem but well-written, Brenda. I like the song too.
- AUTHOR
ValKaras,
Thank you. I am glad you find this short piece of work beautiful.
You are right, he does not deserve her.
Brenda -- It's a beautiful poem; he obviously doesn't deserve her.
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