Poem: Etching in My Mind

Updated on August 5, 2019
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BRENDA ARLEDGE
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I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

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Your manners and ways,
words spoken in haste,
no amount of love
will ever erase
this etching in my mind.

You created a wedge
between your heart and mine,
faded feelings
now drifting away
with time.

"Our Love is Fading Away" by Johnny Rion

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        John Hansen 

        6 months ago from Queensland Australia

        So true, Brenda, without heartache there would be very few country and western songs.

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        BRENDA ARLEDGE 

        6 months ago from Washington Court House

        Thank you, John.

        I think we all can write sad poems, after all what would country and western music be without heartaches?

        So glad you enjoyed the song. It is a little older and not too well known, but fitting.

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        John Hansen 

        6 months ago from Queensland Australia

        Sad poem but well-written, Brenda. I like the song too.

      • Brenda Arledge profile imageAUTHOR

        BRENDA ARLEDGE 

        6 months ago from Washington Court House

        ValKaras,

        Thank you. I am glad you find this short piece of work beautiful.

        You are right, he does not deserve her.

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        Vladimir Karas 

        6 months ago from Canada

        Brenda -- It's a beautiful poem; he obviously doesn't deserve her.

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