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Poem: Etching in My Mind

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

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Your manners and ways,
words spoken in haste,
no amount of love
will ever erase
this etching in my mind.

You created a wedge
between your heart and mine,
faded feelings
now drifting away
with time.

"Our Love is Fading Away" by Johnny Rion

© 2019 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on August 06, 2019:

So true, Brenda, without heartache there would be very few country and western songs.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on August 06, 2019:

Thank you, John.

I think we all can write sad poems, after all what would country and western music be without heartaches?

So glad you enjoyed the song. It is a little older and not too well known, but fitting.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on August 06, 2019:

Sad poem but well-written, Brenda. I like the song too.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on August 05, 2019:

ValKaras,

Thank you. I am glad you find this short piece of work beautiful.

You are right, he does not deserve her.

Val Karas from Canada on August 05, 2019:

Brenda -- It's a beautiful poem; he obviously doesn't deserve her.