Poem: "Embedded Love" - LetterPile - Writing and Literature
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Poem: "Embedded Love"

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Poem Summary

Embedded love tells the story of how she is happy to share moments with him even if it is for the last time.

Nothing can erase the memories she carries within her heart.

Their love is buried within the atmosphere, strengthening the walls between heaven and earth.

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"One More Day" by Diamond Rio

"Embedded Love"

If this is the last time

her eyes can behold the ocean,

her soul feels happy

to share this moment with him.


No tides

high or low,

can erase the precious memories

she carries deep within her heart.


Each token of the day

circles their love,

buried tightly in the atmosphere,

strengthening the walls

between heaven and earth.

"If Today Was Your Last Day" by Nickelback

© 2020 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 02, 2020:

Lora,

I do hope you are correct.

I do know no one can erase the memories one carries within his heart.

Unless one gets alzheimer's & even then I am sure it shines inside somewhere.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 02, 2020:

Peggy,

Thank yiu so much for those kind words about my writing.

Memories are what we are left with...so I want to cherish them all.

I hope love expands between the two atmospheres.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 02, 2020:

Thank you Ms.Dora!

I appreciate your kind words.

Have a day blessed with happiness.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 02, 2020:

Gypsy,

I am so sorry you had to lose your soulmate.

No time is long enough, but trying to enjoy each moment.

Thanks for reading.

Lora Hollings on October 02, 2020:

You certainly have captured the eternal aspect of true love, Brenda. It never comes to an end, it continues to live on within us. A beautiful tribute to everlasting love!

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on October 01, 2020:

You express true love in such a meaningful and lasting way. Love spans this life and into the next. Memories are so precious.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on October 01, 2020:

I like the title and your poem illustrates it beautifully. Your last two lines solidify it even further.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on October 01, 2020:

Most expressive and come straight from the heart. I would do anything to have my soul mate back but of course, I cannot since he passed on but I tell you even 20 years was not enough

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 01, 2020:

Chitrangada,

Thank you for your visit.

I appreciate your kindness.

Thankfully memories are the one thing that lives with us all forever.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 01, 2020:

Lorna,

Thank you. I always look forward to reading your comments.

You make my heart feel warm.

Have a great day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 01, 2020:

Rosina,

Thank you so much for your kind words.

You have made my day a little brighter.

Sending you blessings for a perfect day.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 01, 2020:

Diana,

Thank you.

I appreciate you stopping by to read my work.

Have a wonderful day!

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 01, 2020:

Ankita,

Thank you.

Sending smiles your way.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 01, 2020:

John,

Thank you so much!

Hope you have a pleasant day!

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on October 01, 2020:

Heartfelt and so touching. You have expressed beautifully. No one can take away the memories.

Thanks for sharing.

Lorna Lamon on October 01, 2020:

A touching and poignant poem with deep feelings which you always manage to convey. Lovely writing.

Rosina S Khan on September 30, 2020:

A highly emotional poem, Brenda. Loved every bit of it. Thank you for your superb contribution.

Diana Carol Abrahamson from Somerset West on September 30, 2020:

True love is memorable, even if it is fleeting at times. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt poem.

Ankita B on September 30, 2020:

Beautiful and heart touching poem Brenda. I loved it.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on September 30, 2020:

This is a touching scenario poem, And well-expressed poem, Brenda. Nice job.