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Poem: Discovering Love

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.

Poem Summary

Discovering love is a poem about a couple rushing into love finding out they have hidden identities. Through heartache and pain their souls connect as one. Now having a closeness where they feel each other's pain. Writing the final chapter of their love as they experience being alive together.

"Thinking Out Loud" by Ed Sheeran

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Discovering Love

When their eyes meet
they rush into love,
misunderstanding the nature of their relationship.

Desperately trying
to accept one another,
they discover hidden identities.

Through trial and error,
heartache and pain,
they survive the romance game,
connecting their souls together as one.

Sensing unique signals from each other,
knowing when one's heart
aches with sadness.

Their lives intertwine
like stars touching the night sky,
writing their final chapter
sharing the experience of discovering love.

"Fellin' Way Too Damn Good" by Nickelback

© 2020 BRENDA ARLEDGE

Comments

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 17, 2021:

Like stars touching the night sky their lives intertwine

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on December 30, 2020:

Manatita44,

Just being alive is a thankful thought.

Take care.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 12, 2020:

Lora,

Thank you so much for your kind words.

I appreciate your enthusiasm about my work.

Have a great day.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 12, 2020:

Heidy,

Awe...that is so sweet.

Thanks for reading.

Heidy Sagnip from Talavera on February 11, 2020:

I don't know, but when I was reading your piece my heart is beating fast. You did a great job, Brenda!

Lora Hollings on February 11, 2020:

A lovely poem, Brenda. You express this deep feeling with vivid imagery and sensitivity which I really liked! An excellent write.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 08, 2020:

Amani,

I guess that is a good thing.

Thsnks for stopping by to read my work.

Amani Utembu from Nairobi -Kenya on February 08, 2020:

This one left me speechless...

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 05, 2020:

Manatita44,

Yes. Sometimes we need to remember that we are alive and living life.

Love is pretty awesome too, if you can find the right partner who understands you.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 05, 2020:

Louise,

Thank you.

I appreciate your kind words.

I came across Ed Sheeran on you tube while looking for a video. I do seem to like his work.

Thanks again for reading.

manatita44 from london on February 05, 2020:

Being alive to love is awesome, but just being alive, is sometimes a refreshing thought. Nice one.

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on February 05, 2020:

That's a lovely poem about discovering love. I like the songs you posted too. Ed Sheeran is such a talented singer.

BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on February 04, 2020:

Clive,

Thanks for reading.

Enjoy your day.

Clive Williams from Jamaica on February 04, 2020:

i found love in this poem.

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