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Over Coming A War Within Us

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The emotions over coming us

While negative energies crossing our paths

making this all hard to express...


Holding it in all that needs to be said

Hoping one day for this hurt to end..


Treating others with disrespect

Not seeing the pain that has been

formed from years of distress


How can others point the finger

when they do not know the facts


Torturing others due to their past mistakes..

This can not continue

If you want peace in your life..

We are all flawed and we all deserve a second chance...

Not defending the bad that has passed

but wanting a new beginning from what has been done..



Comments

Samantha Stoerkel (author) from Miami on October 13, 2020:

thank you so much! I love hearing feedback and so thankful for this!

Samantha Stoerkel (author) from Miami on October 13, 2020:

Thank you so much! this means the world to me!

Sannyasi Raja from Durgapur, West Bengal, India on October 13, 2020:

It is indeed a beautiful poem.

Keep writing more.

Niks from India on October 13, 2020:

Beautiful. It's a heart-touching poem. I liked it, Samantha.