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One Step Forward

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When….

You’re in times of difficulty,

Recovering from tragedy

In the living reality.


When…

You feel lonely

Envied into life’s expectancy

And deceived by someone’s immaturity.


When…

It feels impossible to meet destiny.

Just believe in Lord Almighty

Take one step forward and face the new possibility.

Comments

Jang (author) from Philippines on October 10, 2018:

Thank you for appreciating my poem sir.

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on October 09, 2018:

Hello,

A powerful work confirming the need to cast doubt aside. I like the way you used the word "when" in this poem. It's an indication that we all must at sometimes face serious turmoils - you cleverly avoided using "if." The fact that you want the reader to recognize there are forces greater than him/her shows awareness of the spiritual which many may need reminding of.

Great work.

Thanks again.

Tim