Oh Take Me With You

Updated on September 9, 2019
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An engineer-to-be trying to find solace and solitude in writing.

Amidst the clouds, the deserted stars

hidest thou,

concealing your countenance, your charisma,

from the world so vicious..


Oh how I await, to catch a glimpse of you,

that would quench my heart, quench my soul.

Adorned with dainty dales and ardent alps,

a vision that drives me through a trance.


Alas, the heinous world perturbs my thoughts.

I beseech you,

take me with you,

to a land devoid of gloom and grief,

devoid of misery and melancholy.


Bestow upon me your aura,

to dwell in it, I live and long for.

Thou art shy, so am i.

Hence I find in you a comrade.

The wicked world weakens me,

embrace me, embrace my anguish

I beseech you,

take me with you.

© 2019 Priya Dinesh

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    • Pria Dinesh profile imageAUTHOR

      Priya Dinesh 

      7 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you so much Devika, such kind words mean a lot :)

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      Devika Primic 

      7 months ago

      You write with great expressions and I am impressed of your work. Thank you

    • Pria Dinesh profile imageAUTHOR

      Priya Dinesh 

      8 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks a lot Audrey..Really glad you could feel the connect :)

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      Audrey Hunt 

      8 months ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Beautiful! Mother Moon connects me with her rhythms and waves. I can't get enough of her beauty.

      "The glow and beauty of the stars

      are nothing near the splendid moon

      when in her roundness she burns silver

      about the world."

      Thank you.

      - Sappho of Lesbos

    • Pria Dinesh profile imageAUTHOR

      Priya Dinesh 

      10 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Isykariman :)

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      Isykariman Biridlwanillah 

      10 months ago from Indonesia, Jakarta, and Japan, Osaka

      Sister, good writing. Thanks for sharing.

    • Pria Dinesh profile imageAUTHOR

      Priya Dinesh 

      10 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks Lora :)

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      Lora Hollings 

      10 months ago

      A beautiful poem, Priya, filled with passion and lovely phrases. You paint a lovely picture with your words! Thanks for sharing.

    • Pria Dinesh profile imageAUTHOR

      Priya Dinesh 

      10 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you so much Lorna Lamon, glad you liked it :)

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      Lorna Lamon 

      10 months ago

      There is a real sense of poignancy and yearning in this beautiful poem. Loved it.

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