Oh Take Me With You
Amidst the clouds, the deserted stars
hidest thou,
concealing your countenance, your charisma,
from the world so vicious..
Oh how I await, to catch a glimpse of you,
that would quench my heart, quench my soul.
Adorned with dainty dales and ardent alps,
a vision that drives me through a trance.
Alas, the heinous world perturbs my thoughts.
I beseech you,
take me with you,
to a land devoid of gloom and grief,
devoid of misery and melancholy.
Bestow upon me your aura,
to dwell in it, I live and long for.
Thou art shy, so am i.
Hence I find in you a comrade.
The wicked world weakens me,
embrace me, embrace my anguish
I beseech you,
take me with you.
© 2019 Priya Dinesh
Comments
AUTHORThank you so much Devika, such kind words mean a lot :)
You write with great expressions and I am impressed of your work. Thank you
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Thanks a lot Audrey..Really glad you could feel the connect :)
Beautiful! Mother Moon connects me with her rhythms and waves. I can't get enough of her beauty.
"The glow and beauty of the stars
are nothing near the splendid moon
when in her roundness she burns silver
about the world."
Thank you.
- Sappho of Lesbos
- AUTHOR
Thank you Isykariman :)
Sister, good writing. Thanks for sharing.
- AUTHOR
Thanks Lora :)
A beautiful poem, Priya, filled with passion and lovely phrases. You paint a lovely picture with your words! Thanks for sharing.
- AUTHOR
Thank you so much Lorna Lamon, glad you liked it :)
There is a real sense of poignancy and yearning in this beautiful poem. Loved it.
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