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"Oh Loving Father" a Poetic Writeback on Psalm 51

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Oh loving Father save me!

Oh loving Father,

O loving Father, day and night will think of you

My tendons were broken and my bones shattered

Oh loving Father, shake me with earthquake

So that daily I may not fall asleep

Please oh God, save me from my enemy.


Hear me out, hear my cry

Point the rod towards my heart

and take away all my sins

Keep my both knee glued to the ground in front of Kings

blot out my sins, my one and only King!

Wake me up with songs and hymns to sing


For I am weary and my faith were already thin.

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