Ode On The Deserted Night
ODE ON THE DESERTED NIGHT
In the middest of night
I was frightened by the deserted night
That night destroy my sleep
Whenever I recall it deep
I was watching the punishment of hell
It afraided me and i fell
In the deepest thoughts of cell
I sang a sweetest song of saddest thought
Which was very difficult to remember on spot
As the night was very dark and deep
I came on the pile of heap
Cloudy sky, deserted night and sunny hill
All seemed to me in the shape of devil
The very night surrounded me all around
Oh! It gave me the cruel wound
I can't forget that deserted night
In which through night I sighed
Which I can ever hide
© 2018 Pir Mudasir
Comments
Gilbert Arevalo from Hacienda Heights, California on March 01, 2018:
Pir Mudasir, I felt your loneliness and strong desire to escape from the darkness threatening to destroy you.
Mudasir on February 23, 2018:
Very nice keep it up
Pir Mudasir (author) on February 17, 2018:
Thnx Mary and carretti fr reading my poems thnx a lot
Mary Norton from Ontario, Canada on February 17, 2018:
Love the lines, "sang a sweetest song of saddest thought". Speaks so much.
Robin Carretti from Hightstown on February 17, 2018:
This was so in depth I felt like I was in my own hell but there is always a good side to tell our heart gives us strength to get out of any damage to move on this Godly earth
Pir Mudasir (author) on February 16, 2018:
Thnx Sir Frank Atanacio fr the compliment once again thnx a lot
Frank Atanacio from Shelton on February 16, 2018:
wow you really brought us to Poe and back.. Love the poetry my friend