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Ode On The Deserted Night


In the middest of night

I was frightened by the deserted night

That night destroy my sleep

Whenever I recall it deep

I was watching the punishment of hell

It afraided me and i fell

In the deepest thoughts of cell

I sang a sweetest song of saddest thought

Which was very difficult to remember on spot

As the night was very dark and deep

I came on the pile of heap

Cloudy sky, deserted night and sunny hill

All seemed to me in the shape of devil

The very night surrounded me all around

Oh! It gave me the cruel wound

I can't forget that deserted night

In which through night I sighed

Which I can ever hide

© 2018 Pir Mudasir


Gilbert Arevalo from Hacienda Heights, California on March 01, 2018:

Pir Mudasir, I felt your loneliness and strong desire to escape from the darkness threatening to destroy you.

Mudasir on February 23, 2018:

Very nice keep it up

Pir Mudasir (author) on February 17, 2018:

Thnx Mary and carretti fr reading my poems thnx a lot

Mary Norton from Ontario, Canada on February 17, 2018:

Love the lines, "sang a sweetest song of saddest thought". Speaks so much.

Robin Carretti from Hightstown on February 17, 2018:

This was so in depth I felt like I was in my own hell but there is always a good side to tell our heart gives us strength to get out of any damage to move on this Godly earth

Pir Mudasir (author) on February 16, 2018:

Thnx Sir Frank Atanacio fr the compliment once again thnx a lot

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on February 16, 2018:

wow you really brought us to Poe and back.. Love the poetry my friend

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