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Don 't be so Rude

Harish Mamgain is passionate about writing. He loves poetry.

o-my-muse

Don't be so Rude


O my muse
Don't be so rude
The world may not be
soft and kind
You are not crude
Don't be so rude


Kids immersed in
Serfing and netting
Parents are mute
Don't be so rude


Poor people die of
Hunger and sickness
The world is brute
Don't be so rude


Cinderella owns
Puppets and dolls
But Barbie is cute
Don't be so rude


Mother Nature
Weeps and cries
Stop this loot
Don't be so rude


Guys go
Fighting and rioting
I love you dude
Don't be so rude


Bring me ideas
Day and night
Clad or nude
Don't be so rude
O my muse
Don't be so rude

o-my-muse

© 2019 Harish Mamgain

Comments

Harish Mamgain (author) from New Delhi , India on April 05, 2019:

O yeah Jamie , this is the most pleasant thing to do. I look at trees , streets , and people too. After all , everything we see , go on creating something. Thanks for stopping over and commenting.

Harish Mamgain (author) from New Delhi , India on April 05, 2019:

Eric , this muse thing , of course , is a creation of man. I think , it's writers themselves who have made it popular. I just played with this conception in a lighter mood. Thanks for you thoughtful and valuable comments , my friend.

Jamie Lee Hamann from Reno NV on April 05, 2019:

Then we look at a flower. Jamie

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on April 05, 2019:

Harish I do not like these musings at all. You inspired me to clean. A fine thing to do but not pleasant with the grease of the stove top. Muses sometimes need to just sit in the corner and shut up. How fun we have across all man made boundaries.

Harish Mamgain (author) from New Delhi , India on April 05, 2019:

Ruby , I 'll also praise my muse when she brings up something wonderful to me. Thanks for appreciating this tiny thing.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on April 05, 2019:

Hi Harish. My muse can be rude when she can't come up with something to write about. Another good one....

Harish Mamgain (author) from New Delhi , India on April 05, 2019:

Eric , this muse thing struck my mind in the morning. I thought of writing something about it. Glad you liked this poem. Thank you very much , my friend.

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on April 05, 2019:

Well Harish I surely do like your style. I have a muse so much and cannot see the difference between her and I. I wrote it down somewhere to think about. You did it for me here.