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No One Could See


Her eyes were like a sea

filled with water,

that no one could see.

A tsunami is going to occur,

but still, she knows that no one cares.

She always tries to hold her tears

until everyone leaves.

After this day, where the tsunami came

and she burst out of crying.

She felt like she's dying,

She cried for so long.

She is just like an unknown song,

that no one listens to.

Because of her loneliness,

she feels that to nobody she belongs.

People just see her smile which is fake.

It is an earthquake that hit her heart

caused its break.

And a tsunami that hit her eyes,

made her tears a size of a lake.

© 2020 Niajuol Alisruon


Vanita Thakkar on December 14, 2020:

Nice one. Intense in emotions and realistic for many a sensitive people who keep their emotions to themselves.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 14, 2020:

This is so heartfelt and real.

It touches my heart. I can relate to this feeling.

It's almost like myself. I keep things hidden inside and seem to be stronger around other people, not letting them inside.

Great write.

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