My Charismatic King.

Updated on November 3, 2017
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Manatita is an esteemed author living in London, UK. He writes spiritual books, flash fiction and esoteric poetry, his favourite genre.


Sweetheart, my smile often thaws with admiration

Like the lush green meadows pay salutation

To the freshly bloomed Dandelions and Dahlias

When the satin heart unfurls

Her crystal Love in the mellow breeze.

This morning is cocooning new beginnings

As the fragile wings of humming bees

Prance over the velvety leaves

Delighting my twinkling eyes

With an enigmatic buoyancy.

A smile perches on my lips, and I wonder

I wonder… by my troth, whether you’ll be

The lingering fragrance if I’ll be a Rose?

But who has seen morrow, eh?

The eyes only dwell… only dwell

On the wee hours of the morning Sun

That lathers its warmth to the Soul

With a gentle touch of moistness –

Ah! A sweet mesmerizing aspiration!

I closed my eyes to capture the aesthetic moments –

The seconds, the minutes, the hours, the days

But like a whiff of a fresh air,

They soon withered away...

True are the words by the wise old men,

That life is all an encompassing sway

Or perhaps a paradoxical voyage.

I wandered hither and thither,

Perusing the magnificent creatures

Cushioned in the nature’s canopy;

By God! My Love,

They spoke in volumes to me

Echoing in the voidness of a deep tunnel...

That Love knows not ‘mine’ or ‘thine’

It knows not its origin or end,

For it is an imperishable sea

That replenishes the waves of bliss for eternity

And flows like a river of joy,

Unaware of the heavy winds

Encroaching in the sanctum

Of the Universal Soul.

Manatita and friend

compliments of surobhamat
compliments of surobhamat
Courtesy of Manatita
Courtesy of Manatita

Do you know something?

I am tongue-tied today in a peculiar maze

I have lost the key for the utopian gate

Like the fluttering leaves

Traverse in an anonymous forest…

Like the young lovers are lost

Imbibing the heady wine of Love…

Yester night, I treaded like a Swan

Amidst the opulence of a celestial pond

Where a goldfish waiting beneath the blue waters

Asked me of your whereabouts...

Aha! I smiled.

Well, what can I say?

When your name itself suffices…

He who resides in the stellar galaxies

Is beyond the mind

For he is rare of the rarest

Captivating all hearts with cheers

Than the shimmering stars for million years.

Yes, my Dear!

You are the answer to my sacred prayers

Your heart, your Soul, fosters an angelic aura,

Radiating a spirit of inner serenity

In orbit of your full cerulean.

Sweet Luna! Your petal face glows

With a perpetual brilliance

Outsoaring the glory of moonlight.

I know not whether I am frantic or romantic

But these sentiments have showered me

With the Ocean of Love, and

If such immersion is a delinquency,

Then who is the perpetrator?

I know nothing, yet I know of this linguistic

For it is a language of God

That is pure and innocent

And one that fetches laurels

In the alcove of a Bard.

Lo! There are two birds taking a pledge today

Leaving some traces of their vermillion ink –

That their Love shall always remain immortal,

That the dawn and dusk will ring

Eternally on the playgrounds

Narrating their own tales

And their loftiest songs

Will be sung by the young tails.

I’ll not be here, you’ll not be here either

Left behind will be the memories

In the Golden locket

Of timeless eons.

Surabhi Kaura, May 12, 2016, Edited May 24, 2016


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  • manatita44 profile imageAUTHOR


    4 years ago from london

    A great poetess, yes, indeed!! So glad that you are inspired by her work. Hari Om!

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    Siddharth Kapoor 

    4 years ago

    A fairly intense and elegant poem. She is beautiful. Surabhi's poetries are resplendent. I joined hubpages when I read her poems. Great bond here my friend.

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    4 years ago

    Yes, Gypsy. Inspirational and sublime all right. Thank you so much!

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    4 years ago

    Yes, Gypsy. Thank you so much! A most beautiful poem!

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    Gypsy Rose Lee 

    4 years ago from Daytona Beach, Florida

    A most inspirational and lovely poem of sublime love.

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    4 years ago from london

    Thanks Eric,Bill, Taruponders, Surabhi, Vellur, Reynold, Venkatachari M. Out of town. Have a great weekend.

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    4 years ago from london

    Thanks Frank. This one is Surabhi's all the way. I only posted it. Out of town. Back later. Will do a flash in your honour then. Much love.

    Al so nice to hear from a man of music such as you are. Thank you so much.

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    Frank Atanacio 

    4 years ago from Shelton

    this was so warm.. very warm words my friend :)

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    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Remarkable and ecstatic of love automatic; superb writing makes love exciting. I love it, you two, how the rhythm, and rhymes come through!

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    Surabhi Kaura 

    4 years ago

    Thank you my loving people for appreciating an honourable piece that’s dedicated to my Acharaya ji. Manatita, you truly deserve a treat, buddy... truly. Much Love.

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    4 years ago from london

    Thanks Ruby.

    I saw the Ali tribute late last night. Amazing! Loved BillClinton, speech/eulogy. Having fun yes.

    Post movies now at an expensive Pizzeria. Figure I deserve a treat. Don't you. Ha ha. Until...

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    Ruby Jean Richert 

    4 years ago from Southern Illinois

    Beautiful as always. Have fun on your get-away!!!

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    Nithya Venkat 

    4 years ago from Dubai

    Beautiful poem and a great tribute.

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    4 years ago from london

    On my way out of London guys. To have some fun. Ha ha. I do not know If Bill knows how right he is. I'm nearly always addressing God.

    Surabhi is perhaps a romantic poet but is inspired and so lifts her work also. We blend beautifully! This is her work. Much gratitude.

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    Reynold Jay 

    4 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

    Made me feel good as well, Manatita. Well done!!!

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    Tarun Chhauda 

    4 years ago from Roorkee, India

    A commendable piece to honor the literary prowess of two poetic sensibilities. Thanks for etching our lives with something super worthy of our while.

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    Bill Holland 

    4 years ago from Olympia, WA

    Beautiful as always. The thing about your tributes that I like so much....they are dedicated to one particular person but they make us all feel good about ourselves. That is a gift you have, my friend.

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    Eric Dierker 

    4 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

    My favorite subject by one of my favorite writers. You carried me away with your poetry to a place I long to visit Thank you for that.

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    Venkatachari M 

    4 years ago from Hyderabad, India

    Beautiful and awesome! Beautiful description of love and reverence in enchanting lines. Surabhi and yourself are great poets.

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    4 years ago from london

    Thank you, Emge. Appreciated.

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    MG Singh 

    4 years ago from Singapore

    Lovely poem on sublime love


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