Mood Clouds
I am a teenage amateur writer. Just trying to make my way through random things that keep me busy and away from my anxiety
They seem to understand me
And my mood
Last night it rained like their was no tomorrow
I was dripping wet as if i was never going to go dry again
My body was covered in rainwater
Except my face that beared sad tears falling from my eyes
As if the clouds understood my vulnerability
*Flashback*
Staring at the morning sun with the clouds glistening by it's side
the rays emerging from it's sides
Was a picture that was saved in my mind's gallery
Something that gave me pure comfort
I always looked at the clouds when I was reminded of my mother
The varying shades of grey that looked pretty much like a dark horse
I wished to ride it as a child
They were my source of euphoria
The next morning I look at the rainbow
Comments
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 16, 2021:
Thanks Peggy for your compliment.
Hope you have a great day ahead.
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 16, 2021:
Thank you for your compliment vidsagster.
Hope you have a great day ahead.
VIDYA D SAGAR on September 16, 2021:
Nice poem Ishika. It's fascinating watching the clouds change shape. Mood clouds is a nice name for the poem. We feel they understand our moods better sometimes. Good job and all the best.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on September 16, 2021:
Ishika
I absolutely love the picture in the beginning.
I can clearly see a Horse.
You can keep your work on the newsfeed by going to statistics page & choosing author's view.
Then leave a comment.
Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on September 16, 2021:
That cloud image does look like a galloping horse. It is fun looking at clouds and discerning different shapes from them. Mood clouds is a good name for this piece of poetry.
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 16, 2021:
Thank you for your compliment misbah.
Hope you have a great day ahead.
Misbah Sheikh from The World of Poets on September 16, 2021:
Beautiful poem and a good response to Brenda's prompt. I especially liked the image of the horse in clouds.
Blessings to you!
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 15, 2021:
Thank you for your compliment chitrangada ji.
Hope you have a great day ahead.
Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on September 15, 2021:
Nice response to the word prompt, Clouds!
Well expressed, and well done, Ishika.
Thank you for sharing!
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 15, 2021:
Yup brenda actually I had posted it through my phone rather than pc and therefore some of the text in the summary isn't visible.
I will definitely include your name.
Thank you for your compliment.
Hope you have a great day ahead.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on September 15, 2021:
Ishika
Your poem, "Mood Clouds" describes how it seems like clouds can understand our moods.
When we cry, they seem to comfort us.
Like that next morning after we are sad, when we can see the rainbow.
Great poem on clouds. I will post in the word prompt article.
Please add a box of text to your article & say that your poem is in response to this word prompt ~ Week 30 (clouds)
This way everyone knows it is. Including me.
Thanks.
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 15, 2021:
Thank you for your compliment john.Hope you have great day ahead.
John Hansen from Gondwana Land on September 15, 2021:
Clouds are amazing in all their forms. Nice poem, Ishika. Thanks for sharing.
manatita44 from london on September 15, 2021:
Seems you were following Brenda's prompt. Not necessarily so, minds can think alike. If it is, then you may wish to mention her name and her 30th Prompt here. Love your zeal for one so young. Stay well and blessed.
ISHIKA MEHERE (author) from NAGPUR on September 15, 2021:
Thank you manatita.
Hope you have a cheerful day ahead.
manatita44 from london on September 15, 2021:
Beautiful!
