Modified and Matured—Poem

Thank you so much Lora Hollings, for putting it all together, so beautifully.

I can see that many readers can relate to the poem. That itself is an indication that these things do happen and life doesn’t and shouldn’t stop after that.

Life is a blessing and we must put, the not so good memories, behind us and keep on moving forward.

Appreciate your valuable comments and thoughts. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thank you Shaloo, for reading and appreciating the poem.

Yes, hope is perhaps our most reliable and best companion. It can never leave us, even if others do so.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Thank you Ram Ramakrishnan Ji for appreciating the poem! Glad you liked it.

These are harsh realities of life and many of us have faced such situations at one time or another.

Thanks again for your kind visit and positive feedback!

Thank You Manatita for coming back! Yes I know, only a spiritual person, can compose so beautifully. You write from heart, so it touches hearts.

I bow my head to Praise the Almighty and Guruji for the blessings!

Thank You Manatita for appreciating the poem! It means a lot coming from you. You are the best.

Thank you and a great day to you!

Thank You Anusha, for your kind visit and valuable comments!

Yes, these are harsh realities of life and most of us do go through such experiences at some point of time. What matters is how we deal with them. Once we decide to move on, it definitely makes us stronger as a person.

Thanks for the follow and glad to meet you!

Thanks Tamara for your appreciation of the poem! Most of us go through such feelings in our lives. It’s wise to move on and live happily.

Glad you liked the video too. Have a wonderful day!

Thanks Nell for the encouraging words and appreciation of the poem!

It needs lot of will power to build such attitude but it’s worth it.

Always a pleasure to hear from you.

Thank you Dianna for appreciating the poem and it's theme!

Many thanks for reading and commenting!

Thank you Thelma for reading and appreciating!

I am sorry that something like this happened to you. But I am really happy that you have moved on and become stronger.

Many people go through betrayal as I can read the comments. But it's good that they recover and are more mature after facing the unpleasant situations of life.

Thank You and a very good day to you!

Thanks MarleneB for your kind comments and appreciation of the poem!

I haven't heard Taylor Swift's song but would now look for it. Feel honoured by your thoughts about Taylor reading my poem!

It is very natural to be angry and dark after facing betrayal. But it needs lot of will power to rebuild yourself once again . But that's the right thing to do.

Glad you liked the theme of this poem. Your feedback is always a pleasure.

Thanks a lot!

Thanks Shyron for stopping by!

I am sorry that something similar happened to you. But I understand that you have moved on and Happy with your life, since that is the best option for us. Isn't it!

Many people can relate to the theme of this poem as I can see. But glad to note that they have become wiser, more mature and stronger than earlier. That's the beauty of human nature--adaptability!

Many thanks for reading and commenting on this poem!

Thank You MsDora for your kind visit and appreciation!

It's always a pleasure to read your comments. My title was initially something like you have written here but it was tweaked to suit the niche site.

Thanks again for your valuable feedback and appreciation of the poem!

Thanks Devika for your encouraging comments!

I understand that you are a person with positive outlook towards life . Thanks for sharing your thoughts here and appreciating the poem!

Thank you Tim Mitchell for your wonderful comments!

What a thoughtful observation and comparison between humans and metals! Yes we become stronger and more mature after facing adversaries in life. So strong that nothing can break or bend us.

Many thanks for reading and appreciating the poem!

Well said billybuc! Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the theme of this poem!

Always a pleasure to read your feedback! Thank You!

Thank You Ericdierker for sharing your views with regard to the theme of this poem!

I agree with you that it's not easy to mend a broken heart . But we have no other alternative but do so-- find other reasons to be happy. Sometimes love and respect comes from such people whom you could least imagine.

Have a blessed day and thank you so much for stopping by!

Thank you Peggy Woods for appreciating the hub and I agree with you about the maturing process!

As I mentioned in earlier responses, it's not me but one of my very close relative who had to undergo traumatic times due to her close relative's deceitful acts.

Glad to let you know that she is a much maturer person now and is able to deal such people and situations of life.

Yes goodness does exist and life provides us with other alternatives.

Appreciate your concern and thank you!

Thank you Linda for stopping by and appreciating the poem!

It's not a personal experience but was inspired by someone very close who suffered the pain and deceit by her most trusted one. Sadly betrayal comes from those whom you can suspect the least. I am happy that my very close relative has moved on and happily busy with her life.

I believe many of us face such difficult situations in life, some would share it , while others prefer to keep it to themselves.

Appreciate your concern, thank you!

Thank You Hari Ji for appreciating!

Your opinion matters as you are so good at expressing your thoughts in poems.

Many thanks once again!

Thank you Louise Powles for your kind visit and appreciation of the poem!

Yes I think most people experience something like this, at some point in their lives. The best way is to move on though it's easier said than done.

Thank You so much!

Thank you John for appreciating the poem and your concern!

One of my close relative was shattered due to deceitful acts done by her most trusted ones against her. I could feel her pain and in fact helped her to come out and move on.

I wanted to write the poem in third person but it didn't sound good to me.

Your feedback matters a lot to me. Thank You!

Thank you Susan for reading and appreciating !

I am glad you have moved on. That is the best option . May God Bless You with more happiness !