Nithya Venkat enjoys writing about nature and different aspects of life in the form of poetic verses.
One Moment
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Mirror reflections
A walk down memory lane
Reliving moments
Through laugh lines and wrinkles
A look into the mirror
Memories brought back to life
Reliving the past in the present
Quantum leap from then to now
Twin images are different somehow
Is that me, I wonder
Time has played its game
Stitching one moment at a time
Drawing on my skin
Outlining my image
Me as I am today
As time holds up a mirror
I wonder, is that me
Who is that stranger on the other side
Time, drawing me away
Trying to reign in my spirit
Weighing me down
I break free from the shackles
My spirit soars
I am born again
I am free
© 2019 Nithya Venkat
Comments
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on June 11, 2020:
Thank you Brenda.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on June 11, 2020:
I shared this one too.
Here is the link.
https://www.facebook.com/101958054719811/posts/154...
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on June 05, 2020:
Thank you Brenda, you are right. It is what the eyes perceive that really matters.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on June 05, 2020:
So many great lines in this one
Reliving moments
Through laugh lines and wrinkles
And
Quantum leap from then to now
Twin images are different somehow
This poem tells the story of how our reflection shows us our life.
The mirror is an amazing object...but it's what iur eyes perceive that matters.
Great write.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on December 04, 2019:
Mirrors are deceiving when the reflection is not true to the self.
Devika Primic on December 03, 2019:
Mirrors are deceiving to me I do not look much in the mirror. A surprise of how poetry holds my eye and you have showed that in your expressions.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on August 27, 2019:
Thank you Dana Tate.
Dana Tate from LOS ANGELES on August 27, 2019:
Oh, mirrors they can be deceiving. Sometimes a blessing or a curse..
Lovely poem.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 28, 2019:
I wonder too, time flies. Thank you for your visit and comments.
Peg Cole from North Dallas, Texas on May 27, 2019:
How true your words are. Looking in the mirror these days can be quite a shock to me. Where has the time gone? Lovely poem.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 07, 2019:
Thank you Linda. Mirrors can be deceiving.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 07, 2019:
Dora Weithers, thank you. I love happy endings.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 07, 2019:
Thank you Gypsy Rose Lee.
Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on May 07, 2019:
Mirrors can be strange devices that do far more than just provide a reflection. This is an interesting poem with a very inspirational ending. Thank you for sharing it, Nithya.
Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on May 06, 2019:
Followed you through the reflections in the mirror. I'm happy with the ending. I can relate.
Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on May 06, 2019:
Beautiful verse and love how you end it was such hope.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 06, 2019:
Mary, I am so glad that my poem was a source of inspiration to you. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 06, 2019:
Am glad that we are on the same path. Have a lovely day and thank you.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 06, 2019:
Thank you Bill.
Mary Norton from Ontario, Canada on May 05, 2019:
I can relate very well to your reflections, I did when I read it, until the last lines which surprised me and lifted me up...yes, we are free.
Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on May 05, 2019:
This is nice. You and I are on the same path. I just wrote a poem titled "the face in the mirror". Have a lovely day.
Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on May 05, 2019:
Beautiful reflections....we can all relate to your words!
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 04, 2019:
Thank you Ruby. You are so right.
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 04, 2019:
Thank you Eric, thank you Gabe. Am so happy that you both liked the poem.
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on May 04, 2019:
This is surreal. Mirrors can be an enemy or a kind friend. Thought provoking for sure.
Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on May 04, 2019:
I just love this Vellur. My son and I just read it together
Dear Ms. Vellur, I really liked your poem. For me the mirror is different now.
GABE
We talked about reflections not only of time but of our own light.
Thanks
Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 04, 2019:
Thank you, Hari Prasad.
Hari Prasad S from Bangalore on May 04, 2019:
Beautiful lines. The spirit is always young and free. Inspirational poetry Nithya. Thanks.
- hari
