Mind in Error

Updated on March 3, 2018
Rebecca Brewer profile image

Rebecca Brewer is a poet and shes always known it just needed to see her words touch someones life.

Mind in Error

So many times I've been in this same place

Just somewhere different

Thinking of my actions

Like what I did and what I didn't.

This is what brings me back

when that last stair starts to crack

When that last step breaks

I trip and fall

Into darkness into nothing at all

Feelings of immense emotion

of who I was, who I am, and who i'm meant to be

Being let down, a disappointment, not again

that's what i see.

How long has it been since you opened that book

I fight with myself daily only God knows that look.

For God so loved the world he gave his only son

and we take for granted things

that could happen even the outcome.

I feel i've messed my life up

to the point of no return

to the point i'm unfixable

yet i still learn.

I do not feel worthy

enough for God to love me

the mistakes i've made break his heart

very insultingly.

Please God forgive me for what i'm trying

not to do. For I was reminded by my son

one day he said,

But Mom Jesus Loves You.

Questions & Answers

    © 2018 Rebecca Brewer aka Becca


      0 of 8192 characters used
      Post Comment
      • profile image

        Becca Brewer 

        11 months ago

        Thank you Alisha

      • aliciaharrell profile image

        Alicia Rose Harrell 

        11 months ago from Central Oklahoma

        Keep writing poetry! You are a wonderful contemporary poet :D

      • Rebecca Brewer profile imageAUTHOR

        Rebecca Brewer aka Becca 

        11 months ago from Conway, Ar

        Thank you i appreciate all the feed back i can get.

      • KrakyePoku profile image

        Krakye Omane Poku 

        11 months ago from Ghana

        That's very comforting, the thought of God still loving us despite our flaws and struggles to remain right and just. It's a beautiful piece Becca. keep it up

      • Rebecca Brewer profile imageAUTHOR

        Rebecca Brewer aka Becca 

        11 months ago from Conway, Ar

        thank you

      • DomShadows profile image

        Dom Shadows 

        11 months ago from Zanesville, Ohio

        I like your style of writing it is a lot like my own. Keep up the good work.


      This website uses cookies

      As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, letterpile.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

      For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://letterpile.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

      Show Details
      HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
      LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
      Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
      AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
      HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
      HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
      Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
      CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
      Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
      Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
      Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
      Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
      Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
      Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
      VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
      PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
      Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
      MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
      Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
      Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
      Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
      Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
      ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
      Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)