Mind in Error

Updated on March 3, 2018
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Rebecca Brewer is a poet and shes always known it just needed to see her words touch someones life.

Mind in Error

So many times I've been in this same place

Just somewhere different

Thinking of my actions

Like what I did and what I didn't.

This is what brings me back

when that last stair starts to crack

When that last step breaks

I trip and fall

Into darkness into nothing at all

Feelings of immense emotion

of who I was, who I am, and who i'm meant to be

Being let down, a disappointment, not again

that's what i see.

How long has it been since you opened that book

I fight with myself daily only God knows that look.

For God so loved the world he gave his only son

and we take for granted things

that could happen even the outcome.

I feel i've messed my life up

to the point of no return

to the point i'm unfixable

yet i still learn.

I do not feel worthy

enough for God to love me

the mistakes i've made break his heart

very insultingly.

Please God forgive me for what i'm trying

not to do. For I was reminded by my son

one day he said,

But Mom Jesus Loves You.

© 2018 Rebecca Brewer aka Becca


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      Rebecca Brewer aka Becca 8 days ago from Conway, Ar

      Thank you i appreciate all the feed back i can get.

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      Krakye Omane Poku 8 days ago from Ghana

      That's very comforting, the thought of God still loving us despite our flaws and struggles to remain right and just. It's a beautiful piece Becca. keep it up

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      Rebecca Brewer aka Becca 12 days ago from Conway, Ar

      thank you

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      Dom Shadows 12 days ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      I like your style of writing it is a lot like my own. Keep up the good work.