Maybe It's Our Pride

Updated on December 13, 2017

Does it all come down to our pride a delicate hand to kiss but always a maybe. I don't seem to understand the why and how?

Like its some pride and prejudice and where is the wedding rice. And next you keep hearing the maybe so Victorian it's set perfectly in gear. But somehow, why

She moves inside the movie her name

is "Greer"

Her hands to be kissed like

chocolate kisses affair

What a jar mason she needs to be loved

so blessed like a person

How do I love thee how it manifested

and intertwined with liaison

His love words continued with no credibility

But no maybe's when I saw the

"Valentine" of wines

I felt so unsettled a part of me became


Maybe I could have used his flattery

he was a priest of fatherly

It was a maybe or may it be

Or something

Tearing at me

So judging

Hiding around it

Faces lit

Inside me he found it

A piece to hold onto

So on its said

The maybe again

He didn't let me be

Everything is maybe

Falling from my eyes

of the looking glass

He was thinking and then

Something hit him to pass

Maybe someone better to grab

But God I am here writing in my hub

This didn't rub another sob in my tub

A voice for words Robin red breast

Took her own risk of birds

Voiceless feeling nothing but

Maybe it was really amazing

Something so molecule a kiss

on the hand Victorian tuille

Moving forward he's so flattering

He left my thought for words all


Is love so capable givable and

very hand of decks lovable

So why is there all the maybe's

Victorian shades of green gables

Let's be available true love

And be willing and able

Her hands are cold but this is the last scene how we need to warm up the romance. Please we have our pride no maybe's a love how it should be.

Now this was the gentleman of all kisses. No interruptions and buts or maybe's the grace of getting old, it stays with you he loves you to the end of time she'

© 2017 Robin Carretti


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      Robin Carretti 4 weeks ago from Hightstown

      That's great I loved it too that's why I put it in my poem it blended inside. Thanks

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely poetry. Enjoyed. Pride and Prejudice is a favorite movie of mine.

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      Robin Carretti 5 weeks ago from Hightstown

      Thanks so much it means a lot to me when someone gets something out of my reads all the best to you

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      Louise Powles 5 weeks ago from Norfolk, England

      That's a beautiful poem, Robin. I enjoyed reading that, thankyou.