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Love in Mists

Vishw Deepak Jain is a student at Institute of Chartered Accountants of India (ICAI).


For the one who is living there only knows,

the unknown secret powers by core he grows.

May our soul free from mortal mesh,

And our love not inherits in hearts of flesh.

If the questioning in our tale goes on high,

No eye would ever gaze in eyes.

No achy breasts will long to meet,

And find their seventh heaven complete.

Then leave,sweet , the buts and why,

I will love you until i die.

As i should love you until i live,

And you in me is that you give.

© 2018 Vishw Deepak Jain


Upendra. Singh on September 02, 2019:

Extremely dramatic but highly. Lyrical

Tanu on August 01, 2019:


Sanjeev yadav on April 09, 2019:

Heart touching !!!

Prof,Ravi on March 26, 2019:

Amourous and touching

Manish sharma on October 14, 2018:

Matchless and touching lyric

Akash on October 12, 2018:


Dalveer on September 09, 2018:

Excellent and unsurpassing

Sheela jain on September 02, 2018:

Highly melodious and lyrical

prof K. P. singh on August 30, 2018:

Here is the inner urge and spiritual quest of the poet

Surbhi sharma on August 30, 2018:

These lines are so romantic ......and miracle.....

I will love you until I die.

Riya sharma on August 28, 2018:

Inspirational and absolutely stunning

Shruti jain on August 28, 2018:

The use of diction is praiseworthy

Saurabh sharma on August 27, 2018:

The poet is very mystic

Sagar on August 07, 2018:

Extremely lyrical

Sachin jain on July 12, 2018:

Great use of rhyming pattern AABB in this poem by the poet

hitanshu jha on July 12, 2018:


Vk jain on July 12, 2018:

Heart touching and inspiring

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