Vishw Deepak Jain is a student at Institute of Chartered Accountants of India (ICAI).
LOVE IN MISTS
For the one who is living there only knows,
the unknown secret powers by core he grows.
May our soul free from mortal mesh,
And our love not inherits in hearts of flesh.
If the questioning in our tale goes on high,
No eye would ever gaze in eyes.
No achy breasts will long to meet,
And find their seventh heaven complete.
Then leave,sweet , the buts and why,
I will love you until i die.
As i should love you until i live,
And you in me is that you give.
© 2018 Vishw Deepak Jain
Upendra. Singh on September 02, 2019:
Extremely dramatic but highly. Lyrical
Tanu on August 01, 2019:
Sanjeev yadav on April 09, 2019:
Heart touching !!!
Prof,Ravi on March 26, 2019:
Amourous and touching
Manish sharma on October 14, 2018:
Matchless and touching lyric
Akash on October 12, 2018:
Dalveer on September 09, 2018:
Excellent and unsurpassing
Sheela jain on September 02, 2018:
Highly melodious and lyrical
prof K. P. singh on August 30, 2018:
Here is the inner urge and spiritual quest of the poet
Surbhi sharma on August 30, 2018:
These lines are so romantic ......and miracle.....
I will love you until I die.
Riya sharma on August 28, 2018:
Inspirational and absolutely stunning
Shruti jain on August 28, 2018:
The use of diction is praiseworthy
Saurabh sharma on August 27, 2018:
The poet is very mystic
Sagar on August 07, 2018:
Sachin jain on July 12, 2018:
Great use of rhyming pattern AABB in this poem by the poet
hitanshu jha on July 12, 2018:
Vk jain on July 12, 2018:
Heart touching and inspiring