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Loneliness--A Poem

Updated on October 24, 2017
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Words, wordplay, reading, and writing have been favorites of Liz's since early childhood. She enjoys exploring science and science fiction.

Loneliness

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How do you describe

the feeling; the despair?

How do you tell about

...alone?

No friends to talk to

or share your space.


Alone.

All a - lone; by myself

be - side myself.

What image will conjure

the feeling

for another to see?


Compare it to jail?

No, not quite.

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Locked in, though;

that seems to fit.

A room, but empty of toys.

Nothing to do, to see

or touch.

You can't get out;

there is no key.

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I enter the room;

the door closes

and is gone.





(Originally written July 1987, 
under my former name, C.E. Carl)
(Revised October 2017, C.E. Elias)

© 2017 Liz Elias

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    Larry Rankin 2 weeks ago from Oklahoma

    Wonderfully said!

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    mythbuster 3 weeks ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

    Thank you for sharing this descriptive view of being alone and of loneliness. I like the line, "A room, but empty of toys." This line has a lot of impact for me. Again, thanks for sharing :)

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    Liz Elias 3 weeks ago from Oakley, CA

    Hi, Audrey! Thank you so much. I am touched that this poem is striking such a chord with people.

    I guess loneliness is not an uncommon malady.

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    Audrey Hunt 3 weeks ago from Nashville Tn.

    A touching, descriptive interpretation on loneliness. This is wonderful!

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    Liz Elias 3 weeks ago from Oakley, CA

    Thank you, Mark, for your praise of this poem. I'm most pleased you liked it; it is one of the ones that just sort of 'came to me' out of the blue.

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    Mark Tulin 3 weeks ago from Santa Barbara, California

    Beautiful poem, Lizzy on such a difficult topic. Liked the way you spaced the words on the page and broke some into syllables. Anyone reading it I’m sure will feel less lonely.

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    Nell Rose 3 weeks ago from England

    Always good to see you Lizzy! :)

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    Liz Elias 3 weeks ago from Oakley, CA

    @ Verlie; Nice to meet you, and I thank you for your kind words. I'm pleased you found this old poem so meaningful.

    @ Nell; Hi there, my friend! You are so right, that it can weave itself into your dreams, and all your life. Escape takes true hard work. Thanks so much! I'm pleased and honored that you found this to be 'powerful.'

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    Verlie Burroughs 3 weeks ago from Canada

    Perfect Lizzy, you nailed it! I sense a kindred spirit in this old poem, (old, but still so, timeless) thanks for posting.

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    Nell Rose 3 weeks ago from England

    Powerful stuff Lizzy. And yes loneliness can get you like that. In fact it can even enter your dreams, as I know. good to see you writing again!