Insomniac: Like a fire burning
Like a fire burning
Like a fire burning
You are my light in my darkest life
The air of my lungs
The nourishment of my body
Like a fire burning
Your flame disturbs me
Constantly awakes me
Making me new every morning
You are the torch I have on my way home
While I pace my track in this deep night
You lighted my vision
Like always and always
Like a fire burning
You made me see you
You saved me in this life
You warmed me and this cold heart.
© 2020 Crezyl
Comments
Jason Nicolosi from AZ on January 13, 2020:
Happy New Year Crezyl!
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 13, 2020:
Lora you were right, a great source of comfort and I know you have yours too. Thank you for reading my work. God bless! Happy 2020❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 13, 2020:
Omo Jason I'm very happy for your presence. It is really a mystery how a certain person affects us like that. It keeps my mind constantly wonder. I am a strong believer of an angel, I love them and one of my most favorite subject. God bless Jason. happy 2020! (Think I never had a chance to greet you a happy new year) ❤
Lora Hollings on January 12, 2020:
Just lovely, Crezyl! Great use of metaphors that capture your deep feelings for this person who is such a source of light and comfort. Thanks for sharing.
Jason Nicolosi from AZ on January 12, 2020:
Beautifully written, and inspirational. Some times a person can be like a guiding light. Like an angel leading us through the woods when we are lost. Helping us to find our way with loving light. I'm glad that you found your guiding light. Great poem Crezyl.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Hi Brenda. I felt overwhelmed. I am happy to be back. Hope that my classes won't hinder me. God bless Brenda ❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Thank you Liz. Glad to hear it ❤
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 12, 2020:
Crezyl,
So happy to have you back.
This one speaks of the intense fire one feels for another.
There flame keeps one going through the day as well as the nights.
It's wonderful to experience this kind of love and passion.
Thank you for the wonderful read.
Great write.
Liz Westwood from UK on January 12, 2020:
Great focussed imagery of fire and light in this poem.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Thank you so much Pamela. So glad you loved it. It means something for me too. God bless! Happy 2020 ❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Hi Gypsy, I am overwhelmed. Thank you always ❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Hello James, glad to have you here. By what you said, you were right, it is for someone who's like my Superman. Thank you for your time James. God bless, hope I can read your works too. ❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Hello Elijah, I really left it open for your own understanding. But for me, it is someone who's been there. The meaning of this poem depends on the person who's reading it, when matches your feelings then that's it. Thank you for your time Elijah ❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 12, 2020:
Ruby! Thank you so much for stopping by. I love that too❤
Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 11, 2020:
This is another lovely poem. I like the concept of a burning light that lead us and you did a wonderful job writing this poem.
Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on January 11, 2020:
Just awesome, expressive, and emotion-filled poetry
James C Moore from Joliet, IL on January 11, 2020:
It sounds like fire is like who you refer to. It's something you can't do without.
Elijah A Alexander Jr from Washington DC on January 11, 2020:
Magnificently said, Crezyl, but it left me with one question, What or Who is it that is "Like a fire burning"? Is it an individual or "the understanding of life"? There is always two sides to everything so I would for it to be made clear.
Thanks for sharing it.
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on January 11, 2020:
" The air in my lungs " Beautiful line!
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 11, 2020:
John! It's 2020 but your words still make me smile. Thanks you always❤
John Hansen from Queensland Australia on January 11, 2020:
Crezyl, your poetry never disappoints. Always full of feeling and passion and makes the reader feel the emotion. Well done.
