There is a magic
that happens in the
when the sun says goodnight
for the day
an energy that transforms
late in the day
while the colors of pink and orange
fill the sky
everything seems just
a little more somber
a little more quiet
where you can listen to your thoughts
Caroline Marie (author) on January 07, 2019:
Thank you Susan :)
Thank you Gypsy :)
Thank you Eric. LOL Kids do think it's exciting. :)
Susan Hazelton from Sunny Florida on September 15, 2018:
What a beautiful poem. You have a wonderful way with words.
Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on November 10, 2017:
Lovely poetic thoughts of the late afternoon. I love the mellow glow and then the purple twilight.
Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on November 09, 2017:
Awe so true. thank you for this nice piece.
But the sky lighting up like that, well with a 2nd grader it is not a peaceful time, more one of excitement.
Caroline Marie (author) on November 08, 2017:
Thank you Demas. It is really true! Haha
Demas W Jasper from Today's America and The World Beyond on November 08, 2017:
Hastening to say: "You are right!"