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Let the Weakness Surrender

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Everyone in this world has weakness of some or other kind;

A fully perfect personality you surely won't find,

Some can't lift heavy, some can't run fast;

And for some, learning is not an easy task,


The person without any sort of weakness doesn't exist;

Still we make our weakness such a big deal that we can't resist,

That leads to form insecurity deep within our heart;

From there unsatisfaction takes birth and tares us apart,


Have a flame in your heart that sets you apart;

and depart that hatred you own,

As the weakness you cry for is not hard to defeat;

and throughout the history its shown,


God even though gave us the weakness, but still he is very kind;

As the weakness you got he gave,but he allowed its boundries to be determined by your mind.

Comments

Sumit on January 07, 2018:

Awesome

AJAY C YADAV (author) on January 07, 2018:

Thankyou

Sagar on January 07, 2018:

Truly amazing

Harish on January 07, 2018:

You have shown the reality very beautifully.

Nitin on January 07, 2018:

I was very much affected because of my weakness this poem did helped me out a lot.Thankyou so much

Pranit on January 07, 2018:

Really awesome.it is very motivating.

AJAY C YADAV (author) on January 05, 2018:

Thankyou Tomaz, i am really glad that you liked it.

Tomaz Jelenko from Slovenia on January 05, 2018:

This poem is so honest...I really like it. Thank you for this pure masterpiece!

AJAY C YADAV (author) on January 04, 2018:

Thank you Prakriti that's so kind of you

Prakriti3110 on January 04, 2018:

Suprb. Ur words is inspiring me