Just Wanted to Say

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Served in the U.S. Army, attended and graduated from The University of Texas-Arlington with a bachelors in psychology and minor in sociology

There was something that I wanted to say,

On the very last day,

Of the year when you and I became one.

That you’ve left a mark,

Which became a spark,

And lit a flame where there was none before.

And from this light,

I survived the night,

To live and love you more.

But as the days grow on,

As the night became dawn,

I could feel you slipping away.

So I just wanted to say,

That I wish you would stay,

And not go away.

Today.

Comments

Augustine A Zavala (author) from Texas on January 23, 2018:

Thank you Peg Cole, exactly the emotion I wanted to convey. Thank you for the visit.

Peg Cole from North Dallas, Texas on January 23, 2018:

You've given this enough romance to convince a loved one of your affection. Nicely done.

Augustine A Zavala (author) from Texas on January 10, 2018:

Thank you for the compliment and visit Gypsy!

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on January 08, 2018:

Most heartfelt and passionate poetry.

Augustine A Zavala (author) from Texas on January 07, 2018:

Martie, thank you for the comment and visit. As you know I like to measure my words, because I want to be succinct and to the point. Thank you again for the visit.

Augustine A Zavala (author) from Texas on January 07, 2018:

Robin thank you for the comment and visit.

Martie Coetser from South Africa on January 07, 2018:

You are a master when it comes to the stringing of only essential words loaded with emotion into a poem. Best wishes for 2018. May it meet all your expectations.

Robin Carretti from Hightstown on January 06, 2018:

Well I just wanted to say this is truly amazing I love the artistic work of stencil too

Augustine A Zavala (author) from Texas on January 05, 2018:

Thank you for the comment and visit. Only tie will tell. Thanks again.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on January 05, 2018:

This is very succinct and to the point. If this was written from a personal perspective I hope that loved one decided to stay.

Augustine A Zavala (author) from Texas on January 05, 2018:

Thank you Isabella. I strive to write with the least amount of words to convey my emotions and message. Thank you again for the comment and visit.

Bella Allred on January 05, 2018:

Aw, that was simple and enticingly beautiful. Nice work!