Just Wanted to Say
There was something that I wanted to say,
On the very last day,
Of the year when you and I became one.
That you’ve left a mark,
Which became a spark,
And lit a flame where there was none before.
And from this light,
I survived the night,
To live and love you more.
But as the days grow on,
As the night became dawn,
I could feel you slipping away.
So I just wanted to say,
That I wish you would stay,
And not go away.
Today.
© 2018 Augustine A Zavala
Comments
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Thank you Peg Cole, exactly the emotion I wanted to convey. Thank you for the visit.
You've given this enough romance to convince a loved one of your affection. Nicely done.
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Thank you for the compliment and visit Gypsy!
Most heartfelt and passionate poetry.
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Martie, thank you for the comment and visit. As you know I like to measure my words, because I want to be succinct and to the point. Thank you again for the visit.
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Robin thank you for the comment and visit.
You are a master when it comes to the stringing of only essential words loaded with emotion into a poem. Best wishes for 2018. May it meet all your expectations.
Well I just wanted to say this is truly amazing I love the artistic work of stencil too
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Thank you for the comment and visit. Only tie will tell. Thanks again.
This is very succinct and to the point. If this was written from a personal perspective I hope that loved one decided to stay.
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Thank you Isabella. I strive to write with the least amount of words to convey my emotions and message. Thank you again for the comment and visit.
Aw, that was simple and enticingly beautiful. Nice work!
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