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Kingdom of Heaven

Kingdom of Heaven

“Killing Me Softly” has always been one of my favorite songs to sing along with. It has such a beautiful sounding melody. And now, I can sing this favorite to my own song lyrics, below, which is a lyrical poem about our Savior, Jesus Christ!

Kingdom of Heaven

Killing Me Softly - Instrumentals - Roberta Flack

God Loves Me

Kingdom of Heaven

Giving my sins to my Savior

Nailing His hands on the cross

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Making Him bleed from my dark sins

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

He chose to take on my sins

I had no doubt He would

And, so I came to love him

To worship all I could

Though, at no fault, he bled on

With kindness in His eyes

Giving my sins to my Savior

Nailing His hands on the cross

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Making Him bleed from my dark sins

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

I knelt down praying in fervor

Astonished by such grace

Then, I felt God’s sweet presence

I was in the right place

He blessed me in His mercy

I knew I would live on

Giving my sins to my Savior

Nailing His hands on the cross

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Making Him bleed from my dark sins

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

It was like He had known me

From a long time before

This is when joy ran through me

It shook my very core

He had been with me always

Closer than I knew

Giving my sins to my Savior

Nailing His hands on the cross

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

Making Him bleed from my dark sins

Watching Him carry all my wrongs

~

Kingdom of Heaven

Kingdom of Heaven

Kingdom of Heaven

Kingdom of Heaven

Killing Me Softly - Vocals - Roberta Flack

© 2017 BBYCGN

Comments

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on November 04, 2019:

Thank you, Christine. ♥️ You are so kind.

Christine Hulme from SE Kent, England on November 04, 2019:

Beautiful....

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 31, 2017:

Thank you, Flourish. I really enjoy music :-)

FlourishAnyway from USA on October 31, 2017:

This is a very worhipful poem and your creativity shines through.

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 23, 2017:

William,

It’s so kind and thoughtful of you to comment. I am thrilled by your words!

Tamara xxx

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 23, 2017:

Thank you for your encouraging comment, TSOM. It makes my day :-)

Tamara xxx

William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA on October 23, 2017:

Such a nice touch to a secular song. I saw Roberta Flack sing this song so many years ago. Your words and her melody bring back memories.

Kathy Henderson from Pa on October 23, 2017:

Tamara

Wow, this is amazing! I found myself singing along as the song is one of my all time favorites.

Awesome and creative!!!!!

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 20, 2017:

Dora,

This is such a beautiful compliment that you have given to me. It means so much!

This is the set of Song Lyrics that I wrote with YOU in mind because you inspire me with your lovely posts of Grace, and Truth concerning our Lord, and Savior, Jesus Christ.

Love,

Tamara xxx

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on October 20, 2017:

Tamara, this is beautifully done. I enjoyed singing the lyrics and they awaken my gratitude for what God has done!

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 19, 2017:

Thank you, Chitrangada, so much for your lovely thoughts, and kind comment.

Tamara xxx

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on October 19, 2017:

Beautiful expressions!

Just this thought that God loves us, makes us feel so much peaceful and protected!

Thanks for sharing!

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 19, 2017:

Louise,

Thank you for your kind words. I am so happy to see you, again! I made a new account, and could not remember all those whom I had followed before, so I’m so glad to be in touch, again!

Yes, Killing Me Softly is such a beautiful melody, as is Roberta Flack’s voice.

Amen to Jesus!

Hugs,

Tamara xxx

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on October 19, 2017:

That's a beautiful poem Tamara. Yes, God is all around and is close to us all the time. I love the song Killing Me Softly.

BBYCGN (author) from Uninhabited Regions on October 18, 2017:

Billy,

Yes..lol..He loves You more than we can ever comprehend! Yes, He keeps you through the night. Not saying it’s not a “rough-go”, at times, (cuz, ya; it is); but, He’s got your back. Amen Jesus!

Hugs,

Tamara xxx

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on October 18, 2017:

Very nice work, Tamara! Jesus must love me; there is no other explanation how I've managed to remain alive this long, and have so many bounties.