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Jellyfish Spine

Jellyfish Spine

Jellyfish Spine

Jellyfish Spine

Jellyfish Spine

Jellyfish ink.

Upon my spine a jellyfish, in ink.

Upon my spine--an oxymoron.

How poetic.

Jellyfish.

In the deep waters floats a jellyfish.

Radiant

Yet effortless.

Bioluminescence

Lights the floor.

Luciferin.

Oxygen.

Rainbow emission

Of the sea.

Rainbow fish become a pale grey

in comparison.

Rainbows, a “meteorological phenomenon”.

Reflection.

Refraction.

Alliteration.

Cumulus clouds,

Accumulation of water

in every drain of New York City

City smog pollutes air with the same color

as those rainbowfish-

Grey.

Or maybe Gray?

I have been told they’re two different colors.

Like the many shades of blue

(baby)

(royal)

(sky)

In the sky whispers

A cold chill

Upon my (cervical) spine.

C4

Diminished.

And suddenly

T5

(thoracic)

Acid

In my bones break down.

(sacrum)

A sacrifice urges me to nothingness.

(coccyx)

Six seconds before going under-

Under.

I am a jellyfish.

Bones no longer holding me up

Skin no longer protecting me

Head no longer bare these thoughts

Of you

And yes I meant to write “bare” not “bear”

Because my mind simply can not strip the idea of your existence

from my racketing brain

Like a racquetball;

Back and forth

I had always lost.

Losing you meant losing

My soul

And that is not a hyperbole.

I have always been a sore loser

You were the only thing lifting me up

And now I am drowning

A wreck

Like the wreckage of the Titanic.

A three-car wreck.

Collision:

1. My bones

2. My skin

3. My head

Have become debris lying on the pavement-

Sitting at the bottom of the wasteland

Humans have made and called “Sea”


You see

I am a ghost--spineless

As a jellyfish.

What does it mean?

The poem creates metaphors between the evolution of human life and love. It discusses how, upon death, humans become jellyfish- ghosts with no spine just as jellyfish are spineless. And how losing a lover feels the same as death, hollow inside-spineless.

© 2019 Jason Nicolosi

Comments

Jason Nicolosi (author) from AZ on November 07, 2019:

No Problem. I knew what you meant. Thanks.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on November 07, 2019:

Wow, please excuse those typos. I wrote that comment on my iPad and the predictive text editor sucks. “Couple” should read “complex” and “had” instead of “hat.”

Jason Nicolosi (author) from AZ on November 07, 2019:

I'm super glad you got to read this one. A lot of effort into writing it. Thanks very much, John.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on November 07, 2019:

Quite a couple piece of poetry with quite vivid imagery and even some scientific facts thrown in. At the start where you said “a jellyfish in ink upon my spine” I thought you must have hat a jellyfish tattoo. Thank you for the interpretation at the end.

Jason Nicolosi (author) from AZ on November 07, 2019:

Thanks, Iqra. I'm glad you had a chance to read it. Your comments are always appreciated and welcome.

Iqra from Pakistan on November 07, 2019:

love the humor and the truth in amazing imagery....

nicely penned ...