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Poem of Love - In the Beginning There Was Only One

I have been writing poetry, fiction and short stories for many years and have completed a book of poems. I also enjoy comedy writing.

Growing Old In Love

Growing Old In Love

In the beginning there was one

We grew and then there were two

We fell in love and then there were four

Two grew to be adults and exited the door

Approaching the end we are now back at two

Condolences, how I miss you

In the end, now back to one.

Pretty soon, i too will leave this land.

© 2020 Clive Williams

Comments

Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 26, 2020:

Yes Linda. Thanks

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on January 24, 2020:

It's a sad poem, but at the same time it's good that the couple experienced love. The caption on your photo is lovely.

Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 24, 2020:

Thanks Brenda

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 23, 2020:

Clive,

Such is the cycle of life if we are fortunate enough to find that special one to share life with this long.

I think it is awesome. Sure it is sad when one is left alone, but he got to experience a life that seems to be quite rare these days.

Great write.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on January 23, 2020:

I know Clive. I didn't mean to belittle you. I love you as a friend. I just want you to be happy. Smiles.

Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 23, 2020:

saddnes is an emotion of life

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on January 23, 2020:

This is sad. Come on cheer up and live life to the fullest. You write some really good poems that puts a smile on my face. Okey Dokie? Cheers

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on January 23, 2020:

Please do no look over here. Sometime ago I learned not to wallow in melancholy but rather be interested in it for the memories. this is great.

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 23, 2020:

That's life but where is the joy Clive?

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on January 22, 2020:

Inevitable but kind of sad, Clive.

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