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In Love-Haiku

Nithya Venkat enjoys writing about nature and different aspects of life in the form of poetic verses.

In Love-Haiku

In Love-Haiku

fragrances uplifting

two hearts beat entwined in love

a walk in the park


walking hand in hand

the soft touch of grass beneath

etched in memory


glow of crimson hues

sun sets in the horizon

romance in the air


every now and then

a sweet gentle breeze caress

reminds me of you

© 2019 Nithya Venkat

Comments

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 16, 2019:

Thank you Shaloo Walia.

Shaloo Walia from India on September 16, 2019:

Beautifully written!

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on August 07, 2019:

Thank you Sherin Skaria.

Sherin Skaria from Kerala,India on August 07, 2019:

You are really good at writing beautiful haikus especially connecting different haikus on the same topic!

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 27, 2019:

Thank you Peggy.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 27, 2019:

Thank you Rajan.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on May 27, 2019:

Such lovely thoughts you expressed in this Haiku poem about love. I especially liked the lines of walking in the park hand in hand.

Rajan Singh Jolly from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar, INDIA. on May 27, 2019:

Beautiful haikus.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Eric Dierker thank you.

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on May 26, 2019:

I left this on follow, to follow up. I have been thinking of the idea of the "In". Your work here put me "into" love. Thank you.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Thank you Rinita Sen.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Thank you manatita44 for your wonderful comments.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Thank you Perspycacious.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Thank you Linda and I am happy you enjoyed reading them.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Thank you Gypsy Rose Lee.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 26, 2019:

Thank you Life Under Construction, am happy I inspired you to write.

Life Under Construction from Neverland on May 25, 2019:

I love haiku's and this is one of the best. Thank you for sharing and inspiring me again to write some more.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on May 25, 2019:

Lovely and wonderful haiku. Enjoyed.

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on May 23, 2019:

These are beautiful poems of love, Nithya. I enjoyed them all, but the last one is my favourite.

Perspycacious on May 22, 2019:

Lovely comments on lovely memories, always fresh reminders.

manatita44 from london on May 22, 2019:

Extremely beautiful! I am so proud of you for using the Japanese style. Many in the West now do their own thing, even writing books on the subject. You're awesome!

Rinita Sen on May 22, 2019:

I love Haiku, and you write them beautifully. They capture the essence of lovers being together well. The last one is my favorite of the lot.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 21, 2019:

Thank you Dora.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 21, 2019:

Thank you Linda Rogers.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on May 21, 2019:

Refreshing. Senses of sight and touch are touched effectively.

Linda Rogers from Minnesota on May 21, 2019:

Beautifully written poem.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 21, 2019:

FlourishAnyway thank you.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 21, 2019:

Miebakagh Fiberesima thank you.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 21, 2019:

Thank you Chitrangada.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 21, 2019:

Thank you Ruby.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on May 21, 2019:

Love is in the air. Beautiful haiku!

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on May 21, 2019:

Beautifully expressed. I can relate to this. Nice first picture.

Thanks for sharing.

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on May 20, 2019:

I agreed.

FlourishAnyway from USA on May 20, 2019:

This was sweet and simple, like young love.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 20, 2019:

Thank you Miebakagh Fiberesima.

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on May 20, 2019:

I love this sweet poem. It's so simple.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 20, 2019:

Thank you John.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 20, 2019:

Thank you Patricia Lawrence.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 20, 2019:

Jay C OBrien thank you.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 20, 2019:

Thank you for your visit and comments Eric. You put your feelings into words and follow the 5-7-5 syllable count in your expression. There are syllable counters to help you out.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 20, 2019:

Thank you Bill.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on May 20, 2019:

Very lovely, and it's about my favorite topic. :)

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on May 20, 2019:

Nithya help me here. This is very cool. How do I do Haiku? I just got pulled in here.

Jay C OBrien from Houston, TX USA on May 20, 2019:

Well done.

Patricia Lawrence from Dayton, Ohio on May 20, 2019:

Nice! Really enjoyed it.

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on May 20, 2019:

A lovely collection of haiku, Nithya. Well done.

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