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Insomniac: If

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If

If a dream wakes you up in the middle of the night
Believe me, I am thinking of you
If you wanted to get lost and walk for a while
I will follow you
If listening to old love songs sadden your heart
I will give my smile to you
If the day is hard and tire you
I will be your safe haven
If rainy days are too bad for you
Don't worry... Just don't worry
If crying and drinking won't do
Call me, I will tell you something
Because if the person you loved cannot love you
I will always be here , waiting for you.

© 2020 Crezyl

Comments

Purvi from India on January 20, 2020:

I feel sad when I read it. You narrate your feelings very nicely. Really, it's a nice poem. I enjoy this.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Hi Linda! Thank you for your kind compliment, I'll take to my heart. God bless ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Hello Brenda, I know it, that is the mystery of love I guess. You cannot fathom your heart, heart always puts me in trouble and still, I can't stop it. Thank you for reading my work Brenda ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Pamela, sadly it is true. I write out of my experience and my young love, it hurts though. But it's still okay, I still feel good. God bless ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Ruby, I wish the same for myself but then there's always 'buts' in our relationship. But I wish he could hear it badly. God bless Ruby❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Hi Liza, I feel great to know that my poems took you back in that certain time. God bless ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Hello John, I really hope so. I wish he had read one of my works and know himself. Thank you ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on January 15, 2020:

Hello Lorna! Thank you for your kind comment.❤

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on January 14, 2020:

This is a beautiful and creative poem about love, Crezyl. The photo matches the poem very well.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 14, 2020:

Crezyl,

Such a sense of undying passion.

To love someone even when he has gone.

To know in your heart if he awakens in the night it is because of your thoughts.

This is awesome.

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 14, 2020:

This is a loving but heart-breaking poem that sounds like it might have been written from a place of pain. I hope that is not true.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on January 14, 2020:

This is very sad, and if there is someone you're missing? I hope he hears you in his heart.

Liza from USA on January 14, 2020:

Beautiful poem, Crezyl. I felt I have been there before. Thanks for sharing your work of art.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on January 14, 2020:

I wish the person you speak about in these poems could read them, Crezyl. He would know what real undying love is. Great job as always.

Lorna Lamon on January 14, 2020:

A beautiful and touching poem Crezyl which speaks of undying love. Loved it.

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