Insomniac: If This Is My Last Poem
If this is my last poem
If this is my last poem
I will be back to death
While this whimpering chaos in my head
Will be the slumbering song of my soul
While my heart stays broken
I will remain lost in the woods of your eyes
While my feelings remain untouched
I will be tired of finding the ecstacy I cannot suffice
When the serenity of the night makes me crazy
I feel like I could die without my pen
I know I would die without you even
If this is my last poem, I want it for you
I heard your subtle whispers through the rain
While in the cold sunshine
I saw your smile and heard your goodbye
If this is my last poem, let me remind you
How can I not love you?
This is the last of my weary body
The last of my dying heart
If this is my last poem
It will always be you
© 2019 Crezyl
Comments
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 19, 2019:
Venkatachari I am very happy to accept your blessings, God bless your life too. Thank you for reading my works, I'll take your words to my heart because it makes me happy and inspired. ❤
Venkatachari M from Hyderabad, India on December 19, 2019:
Crezyl, you write so great putting your feelings so touchingly on paper. I am very much moved by these emotions. You possess great command.
My blessings for a pleasant life to you.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 10, 2019:
Thank you Mark!❤
Mark Tulin from Palm Springs, California on December 10, 2019:
Great title, great poem.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 10, 2019:
Manatita that is because I can appreciate the value of short term things, I know I shouldn't but I can't help it. Anyways, thank you for the positive comment Manatita! I truly appreciate it❤❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 10, 2019:
Hi Louise! Thank you so much. I hope you will like my other works too❤❤❤
manatita44 from london on December 10, 2019:
Haha.
Do not hope for things that are ephemeral ... will perish. But yes, you are young and I understand.
Came back to say that my first comment was directed at a higher Love.
Anyway, I truly admire your craft manship ... your genius as well as your spirit of giving and I have dedicated a Hub to you. Have a look
Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on December 10, 2019:
That's such a beautiful poem, Crezyl. I really enjoyed reading it.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
Blessings for you Kathy! I will wish the same for you. Thank you for feeling my emotion.
Kathy Henderson from Pa on December 09, 2019:
I feel the pain in your words and my heart breaks for you. I wish we could know our worth is far greater than it is to one who has walked away. The future brings the rainbow of joy that a disappointment tries to cloud. May your days be full of rainbows.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
Yes Brenda and my way of soothing my heart is writing. It is just our heart is sometimes silly for choosing the wrong person and continue loving them even for nothing. Thank for reading it❤❤
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 09, 2019:
This is so touching and heartfelt.
The sadness of losing the one you cannot remove from your soul.
We have all been there...it hurts.
Everything reminds you of their warm embrace.
Great write.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
I hope so Manatita but thank you so much for the comment!
manatita44 from london on December 09, 2019:
Fitting for the Lord. Such beauty! Continue reaching for Love in this way and it will soon be yours.Welcome!
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
John! Thank you for always reading my work. It makes me happy whenever I read this kind of comment ❤❤
John Hansen from Gondwana Land on December 09, 2019:
Crezyl, you write of sadness and heartache with such emotion. This is a well-written poem and a pleasure to read.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
Hello Rosina! Don't worry, I will do it. My poems depends on my mood. In the meantime, I am sad but in a little while I'm sure I'll be happy. I will write for you..xD
Rosina S Khan on December 09, 2019:
A poem full of sorrow indeed, Crezyl! I challenge you to do a mind shift and write a happy poem. Will you take that challenge? What do you say?
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
Thank you for checking out my work Nikki! God bless you.
Nikki Khan from London on December 09, 2019:
Such an emotional poem.
I enjoyed all the lines of this romantic but sad poetry.
And, yes keep on writing my dear.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
Don't worry Liz, headaches are endless therefore I can't stop.
Liz Westwood from UK on December 09, 2019:
I hope that this is not your last poem and that you will write many more.
