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If She Won't Be Mine

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I have lost myself.

Don’t know what’s yours,

Don’t know what’s mine.

What if she won’t be mine?

I see her coming towards me,

In the simplest of dresses.

Yet looking the most beautiful woman on Earth,

I don’t know what to say.

Her hand in mine,

Her words are as sweet as honey.

I miss her.

Let me go leaving all things,

Let me go leaving all fake love.

What if she won’t be mine?

I promise I will never leave her,

I promise I will never hurt her,

Let me go, I really miss her.

Comments

Sannyasi Raja (author) from Durgapur, West Bengal, India on October 13, 2020:

Good suggestion. Thanks.

Farah N Huq from Dhaka, Bangladesh on October 13, 2020:

Take her hand and run!

On a serious note: nice poem.

Sannyasi Raja (author) from Durgapur, West Bengal, India on October 13, 2020:

Thank you so much .

Pavan on October 12, 2020:

Very nice

chandrani on October 12, 2020:

nice

Arijit on October 12, 2020:

Beautiful.

Abhishek on October 12, 2020:

Nice writing

Jhilik Nandy on October 12, 2020:

Loved it bro.. U are too good with your words

POULOMI MUKHERJEE on October 12, 2020:

Wow...

Koushik on October 12, 2020:

Sooo deep ....♥️♥️♥️

Relatable .

Amandeep Singh Hans on October 12, 2020:

Nice Lines

Ayesha on October 12, 2020:

Awesome lines..

Pritha on October 12, 2020:

Nice

Sannyasi Raja (author) from Durgapur, West Bengal, India on October 12, 2020:

Thank you.

Sannyasi Raja (author) from Durgapur, West Bengal, India on October 12, 2020:

Thanks. always wait for your feedback

Lorna Lamon on October 12, 2020:

A beautiful poem full of yearning and hope.

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on October 12, 2020:

Wonderfully done. It is touching.