I smile back: a poem

Updated on November 3, 2017

When you're wrong

I smile

Im wrong

I smile

It doesn’t matter

We smile

When rain comes pouring down

From doe-eyed eyes

From mine, from yours

I smile, you smile

We have each other

Not one, not hundred

Could break us

When you move, I move

When you wave, I wave

The reflection of me, my mirror

When you smile

I smile back

© 2016 AngelaJJ


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      Finn Liam Cooper 9 months ago from Los Angeles

      nice poem...good rhythm.

      have you heard of Sharon Olds? a few lines reminded me of her for some reason...but her style is definitely different.

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      AngelaJJ 23 months ago

      Thank u Rachel! ... I am glad u liked it... :)

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      Rachel L Alba 23 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      What a cute poem, it made me smile. Thanks for sharing it.